新prep230求助

ZLSNIPER

from ...to...不是要求from后的对象和to后的对象要一一致么，句中from literary realism  to write romantic stories  一个前面是literary realism 一个是write romantic stories 不一致啊 为什么呢？

lzj1209

from ...to...不是要求from后的对象和to后的对象要一一致么，句中from literary realism  to write romantic stories  一个前面是literary realism 一个是write romantic stories 不一致啊 为什么呢？

-- by 会员 ZLSNIPER (2009/11/14 22:12:08)

LS~~
这里不是from...to...的用法~~
A novelist who turnedaway from literary realism to write romantic stories~
这里turned away from是一个短语~~~to write是一个不定式结构表目的~~~
这个人turned away from literary realism是为了写romantic stories~~~

mirabelwong

开始也错选A了~
我现在的理解是这样的：
A.Turning away fromliterary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscapeof northern Sweden, in 1909Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedishwriter to win（其实这里in 1909的位置不好判断对错，很多人都是根据答案来推的，但我们做题往往最终要回归A选项来检查答案所以这要根据意思来：and前后都出现了the first，前后应该属于平行并列关系，逻辑关系也是，“第一个什么和第一个什么”，但是这里and后面有was就会与前面的was the novelist有平行并列的歧义，这样逻辑含义就错了——所以这里的was多余了）


还有正确答案里有and also~以前看到这两个在一起会把他们当作用词重复给排除掉（上XDF时讲得规则）~
貌似还挺管用~
这是第一个例外的例子~要特别记一下~

-- by 会员 lzj1209 (2009/11/14 2:57:09)

正解
我也觉得那个and also很awkward 所以d给排除了 但是a错误是correctiveness的错误所以必错
就当例外记吧

shadow影

A.
1.个人认为，turning away的动作发出者是Selma，在这里还是可以理解的。虽然in 1909的位置怪异，但是不能作为一个必要的错误排除A.
2.排除A.的关键是，was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win。老Prep1笔记164.，有强调and的连接问题：句子结构，在GMAT 考试中，有一类典型的句子结构错误是子句内容在语法上与主句平行，所以在看到句中的连词and 或or 时，要注意逻辑上的平行对象与语法上的平行对象是否一致。在这里，and was also the first Swedish writer to win逻辑上是与定语从句who became the first woman并列，但是语法上与主句was the novelist并列，造成歧义。
B.
不简洁，用第一句用状语从句比作为独立的句子好，句子逻辑关系更紧密；as well as和And有区别（不是排除点）
C.E.
句子重心改变

其实本题就是A与D的选择

cymissiloveu

楼上分析的A的错误，很赞成！
我也觉得主要是was also the first Swedis writer在并列上造成了歧义。大家仔细看，应该是要跟became平行的，但是这里可能被误认为和was并列，这样一来，语句不通顺了，意思也不对了

YRsunshine

以下是引用onedayling在2009/9/20 20:47:00的发言：
顶~为什么A错？

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
A的逻辑有错误, Selma was the novelist and was also the first swedish writer to win..... 正确，
the novelist who became the first woman 后面其实应该跟to win， 不然该句翻译过来就是 selma 成为了第一个女人.

-- by 会员 yidiyuehan (2009/9/21 0:33:00)

awayseraph77

D选项简写就是， A novelist, 人名+动作，前面的这个名词不是没有谓语么

connie飘着

我个人感觉还是用句子的逻辑意思去判断吧，其次是平行结构。。。A 里从句的意思 “变成第一个女人” 显然不是作者要表达的意思。所以A D 之间 取更好的。

demorgan

我看了很多都是in 1909的位置错误。是不是应该. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden,Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1909  这样A就对了呢？或者放到and的前面？

liuxuan8821

D：  n, SVO  n是同位语   更简洁且句子结构清晰