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yidiyuehan

以下是引用onedayling在2009/9/20 20:47:00的发言：
顶~为什么A错？

 Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

A的逻辑有错误, Selma was the novelist and was also the first swedish writer to win..... 正确，

the novelist who became the first woman 后面其实应该跟to win， 不然该句翻译过来就是 selma 成为了第一个女人.

onedayling

以下是引用yidiyuehan在2009/9/21 0:33:00的发言：

 Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

A的逻辑有错误, Selma was the novelist and was also the first swedish writer to win..... 正确，

the novelist who became the first woman 后面其实应该跟to win， 不然该句翻译过来就是 selma 成为了第一个女人.

哦~原来是这样！才发现~~谢谢YIDIYUEHAN，

不过我还有问题是“Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden”这个部分有错吗？

zanyingsan

以下是引用ursula_1在2009/4/3 15:08:00的发言：

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Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

who修饰了novelist 变成了novelist是什么什么，而且and前后也不对称，不该要was的

B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

from to 结构变成了from and 错误 ，并且这个句子因为逗号后面的and变成了无主语。

C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

这个错误很明显

D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win D正确 in1909我个人感觉好像插入语一样修饰了became的具体时间

E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

from to 结构也变成了from and 错误 并且 becoming是个短暂性的动作实在不适合用ing形式在这里，应该用过去时 that知道了writer 变成了writer获得，也错

RTP

B错在that 不能指人（同理E选项），而且She 不一定就是指 Selma Lagerlof这个人。

[此贴子已经被作者于2009/10/13 12:28:21编辑过]

RTP

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won

C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning

D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

请问A选项，"Turning away.....,"后面要求立即出现其主语（Selma L)，但是A选项在Selma L的前面加上了"in 1909"，使得“Turning away....,"后面没有立即连接其主语S L，——所谓的修饰错误。请问是这样吗？谁知道给说说 谢谢！ 

Amber1991

以下是引用yidiyuehan在2009/9/21 0:33:00的发言：

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

A的逻辑有错误, Selma was the novelist and was also the first swedish writer to win..... 正确，

the novelist who became the first woman 后面其实应该跟to win， 不然该句翻译过来就是 selma 成为了第一个女人.

哦~原来是这样！才发现~~谢谢YIDIYUEHAN，

不过我还有问题是“Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden”这个部分有错吗？

-- by 会员 onedayling (2009/9/21 0:43:00)

觉得改成having turned好点，表示过去，这个问题还蛮严重的

Amber1991

以下是引用onedayling在2009/9/20 20:47:00的发言：
顶~为什么A错？

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

A的逻辑有错误, Selma was the novelist and was also the first swedish writer to win..... 正确，

the novelist who became the first woman 后面其实应该跟to win， 不然该句翻译过来就是 selma 成为了第一个女人.

-- by 会员 yidiyuehan (2009/9/21 0:33:00)

保留意见，turning away应该是修饰selma的，是正确的，后面正解！

Amber1991

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

请问A选项，"Turning away.....,"后面要求立即出现其主语（Selma L)，但是A选项在Selma L的前面加上了"in 1909"，使得“Turning away....,"后面没有立即连接其主语S L，——所谓的修饰错误。请问是这样吗？谁知道给说说 谢谢！

-- by 会员 RTP (2009/10/13 12:32:00)

同问~~盼解答~~

lzj1209

开始也错选A了~
我现在的理解是这样的：
A.Turning away fromliterary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscapeof northern Sweden, in 1909Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedishwriter to win（其实这里in 1909的位置不好判断对错，很多人都是根据答案来推的，但我们做题往往最终要回归A选项来检查答案所以这要根据意思来：and前后都出现了the first，前后应该属于平行并列关系，逻辑关系也是，“第一个什么和第一个什么”，但是这里and后面有was就会与前面的was the novelist有平行并列的歧义，这样逻辑含义就错了——所以这里的was多余了）


还有正确答案里有and also~以前看到这两个在一起会把他们当作用词重复给排除掉（上XDF时讲得规则）~
貌似还挺管用~
这是第一个例外的例子~要特别记一下~

yhwut

A有歧义，in 1909Selma Lagerlof was the novelist， 不知道他是只是1909年是小说家还是一直都是