数个问题，麻烦前辈进来帮忙

sycdmy

1.og11th解释中说的 Rhetorical construction   和  Diction分别是指什么呢？我知道中文意思，但不理解哪种错误可以归类为这到这两种

2.解释中说的  unclear与ambiguous  是一个意思么？

3.逻辑错误是不是指语法上没问题，不过句意不通？

4.which是不是只在gmat中不能引导限定性定语从句？

5. 在og11th黄本中的第5题   

As its sales of computer products have surpassed those of measuring instruments,the company has become increasingly willing to compete for the mass market sales they would in the past have conceded to rivals.

B.they would have conceded previously to their rivals

C.that in the past would have been conceded previously to rivals

D.it previously would have conceded to rivals in the past

E.it would in the past have conceded to rivals

解释：C.Previously repeats the idea of in the past;  我想问这个错误是属于correctiveness还是effectiveness？

the passive voice construction is weak and ambiguous.为什么被动语态语气较弱、模糊不清？

问题比较多！辛苦各位了！！

fighting127

LZ问题很多 不过几篇文章写的都很好 呵呵 我回你一下

1.og11th解释中说的 Rhetorical construction   和  Diction分别是指什么呢？我知道中文意思，但不理解哪种错误可以归类为这到这两种

修辞结构和用词问题

2.解释中说的  unclear与ambiguous  是一个意思么？是

3.逻辑错误是不是指语法上没问题，不过句意不通？是 逻辑>语法

4.which是不是只在gmat中不能引导限定性定语从句？ 是

5. 在og11th黄本中的第5题   

As its sales of computer products have surpassed those of measuring instruments,the company has become increasingly willing to compete for the mass market sales they would in the past have conceded to rivals.

B.they would have conceded previously to their rivals

C.that in the past would have been conceded previously to rivals

D.it previously would have conceded to rivals in the past

E.it would in the past have conceded to rivals

解释：C.Previously repeats the idea of in the past;  我想问这个错误是属于correctiveness还是effectiveness？

这个是effectiveness redundancy的问题要避免

the passive voice construction is weak and ambiguous.为什么被动语态语气较弱、模糊不清？

因为被动要体现出这个动作是被谁作的 就是施动者是谁 有主动的情况优先选主动

alohabrian

1.修辞结构  和 选词
2.unclear，表懿不清；范围比歧义(ambiguity)广
3.句义不通是最严重的问题。比语法错误还严重。
4.是的，而且只能以 "，whchi"出现，引导非限制性从句。
5 严格来说 属于effectiveness的范畴，但是也是很严重的缺点，基本看到 redandant就让它走。
  主动优于被动。

楼主刚刚开始做，上述规则 用来熟悉熟悉就好了。gmat语法没有 定则的。

sycdmy

非常感谢！！！！CD真是个好地方！！！

我昨天刚开始我的gmat之旅。到现在做了46个题也就是og11th的三分之一，正确率在慢慢提高（我每做五个就看一下答案）。

但是感觉自己的速度是不是太慢了啊？？我做题时都没考虑速度的问题~~是不是最开始时就应该这样啊~~

songlovegt

语法的最高原则

借花献佛：

引用薰衣紫草的回帖

sycdmy

醍醐灌顶！非常感谢！~！！