新prep2-162 大家讨论一下吧

lcy19812000

以下是引用天蝎座1107在2009-3-5 20:00:00的发言：

宝车冬宝

不好意思！！天蝎mm，是我看错了。 对比ABDE选项，确实都住为对应的很工整。 我错了我错了。。 mm真厉害

天蝎座1107

以下是引用宝车冬宝在2009-3-5 19:34:00的发言：

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Such orb-weaving spiders like the argiope build webs in an essentially wheel-like structure, with an outer rim and a number of spokes emanating from the hub.

A. Such orb-weaving spiders like the argiope build webs in an essentially wheel-like structure错在such...like

B. Such orb-weaving spiders as the argiope builds webs with what is essentially a wheel-like structure错在orb-weaving spiders应该用build而不是builds AlienX斑斑说such A as B的谓语看A

C. The argiope spider, in the same way as other orb-weaving spiders, build webs in a structure that is essentially wheel-like这个题我最开始给楼主的解释没有抓住重点 今天一看 是应该错在as上了 as后面应该跟句子啊 as other orb-weaving spiders do这个do绝对不能省的啊

D. Orb-weaving spiders such as the argiope build webs that are essentially wheel-like现在再看D觉得很顺眼了 把webs建成wheel-like structure直接就可以用webs that are wheel-like 就像是我们说she has a face with a beautiful apperance 直接说she has a beautiful face就可以了

E. Like other orb-weaving spiders do, the argiope builds webs as essentially wheel-like这个是like加了句子错

答案是D，我个人觉得B更好，such as 举例， 划线部分最后跟上structure，让with修饰清晰。可我不明白D是对在哪里了？？

请大家指教！！！

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jiaojiao1426

 Such orb-weaving spiders as the argiope builds webs with what is essentially a wheel-like structure

我的问题是such A as B 后面的谓语动词是该根据A 还是B 呢？

另外感觉D选项这里的结构build webs that are essentially wheel-like很微妙。如果改为更简洁的形式：build essentially wheel-like webs,会造成essentially既可以修饰build 又可以修饰wheel-like的歧义

总之ETS真是厉害！做这种题目对开发智力有帮助啊~

AlienX

such A as B的單複是看A:
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enjoy_gmat

B最大的问题可能是谓语不对吧，主语是spiders,应该用build才对吧

moreta17

那请问B的what有没有错?

Eliott

up

cymissiloveu

C里的谓语是不是也错了？应该是builds

kennu_r

对