白勇语法 Section 6, 13题

juni_wu

13. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations,

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

答案：C

为什么不是A或E？做这题的思路是什么？

pinklover

原句的思路是 Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world in her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives.

我也看不出A,E从语法上讲有什么不对（请NN指点），但要是按正常顺序理，读上去就很不顺口了

A. Beatrix Potter capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives.

E. Beatrix Potter carefully coordinated them with her narratives and capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world in her book illustrations.

chaok123

我个人认为：

A,B,E中 them 指代不明确。

我倒是看不出来，D为什么不行。   help me,pls!

pinklover

D不对因为D中Carefully coordinated with her narratives 错误地修饰了 Beatrix Potter，应该修饰book illustrations的