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vincentxu

My career dream(理想的职业)

Good morning Ladies and gentlemen, I’m greatly honored to have the chance to stand here to make a speech.在纽约市曼        哈顿区南部,有一条全球闻名的大街, Wall Street (华尔街),
                世界知名的投资银行(investment bank),SUCH  AS-摩根士丹利(MORGAN STANLEY),
            纽约证券交易所(Stock Exchange),
                雷曼兄弟(Lehman Brothers Holdings)都聚集在这里.这里可以称之为金融中心(FINANCIAL PARADISE).然而,随着07年夏天开始(commence),一场金融风暴席卷全球,华尔街也从一个金融圣地变成一个投资者的梦魇.

  (Hatton area in the south, a worldwide famous Main Street, Wall Street (Wall Street), the world's leading investment bank (investment bank), SUCH AS-Morgan Stanley (MORGAN STANLEY), the New York Stock Exchange (Stock Exchange), Lehman Brothers (Lehman Brothers Holdings) have gathered here. You can call it a financial center (FINANCIAL PARADISE). However, as the summer of 2007, A financial crisis sweeping the globe, from a Wall Street financial investors in the Holy Land into a nightmare.)

  这场以美国为源头的金融风暴同样也影响了中国,当人们看者飞涨的物价,居高不下的房价时,人们能做的往往只有叹气,货币开始贬值,人们不知道如何合理运用自己手中的资产,这场财经界的大屠杀似乎成为一个无底洞时,我们需要理性投资,分配手中的资产.

(The United States as the source of the financial crisis also affected the Chinese, when people look at those inflated prices, high housing prices, people can only sigh often, the beginning of the currency devaluation, people do not know how to use their reasonable In the hands of the assets of the financial sector of the Holocaust seem to be a bottomless pit, we need a rational investment, distribution of assets in the hands.)

我理想中的工作-----financial advisers(金融顾问), or we can call them the plan maker, who help you to analyze the risk of your investment, make budget for you .使你的资产配置合理，实现你的财务自由。
            我们绝对不能轻视这场灾难(To make a reasonable allocation of your assets and achieve your financial freedom. We can not afford to neglect this disaster),Which is the most destructive one since 1929. Even little kids know that superman can’t save us! We have to save our-selves! A good -financial adviser can make this easier.

A case in point is that we know the US government has released US dollars 850billion to rescue the soft market(疲软市场),while the CHINESE government released 4000billion, to make every penny count, the financial advisers 全身心的投入(The heart and soul into),to make the price climb slower, or even reverse the tide. Just after the rescue policy come into force , the housing price decreased by 40% .

  According to the <Wall Street Journal>  ,the market will begin to rebound in five to six years, it’s time for me to get the job I dreamed for ,to dominate the headline ,to hold up the financial circle.

结尾…..思考中….

 

kiddie

中英翻译看着头晕