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guting109

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Often billed as "The Genius," American pianist, singer, composer, and bandleader Ray Charles is credited with soul music's early development, a genre based on melding gospel, rhythm and blues, and jazz.

 

(A) Charles is credited with soul music's early development, a genre based on melding

(B) Charles is credited with the early development of soul music, being a genre based on melding

(C) Charles is credited with the early development of soul music, a genre based on
                a melding of

(D) Charles, credited with soul music's early development, a genre that was based on a melding of

(E) Charles, who is credited with the early development of soul music, a genre based on melding

  

(A) a genre…作紧临的名词development的同位语错误；现在分词melding gospel rhythm and blues与and后面的名词jazz不平行。

(B) being多余；现在分词melding gospel rhythm and blues与and后面的名词jazz不平行。

(C) 正确，a genre…作soul music的同位语，动名词a melding of与and后面的名词jazz平行。

根据这句话 这个句子的结构应该是这样的Charles is credited with the early development of soul music, a genre based on (a melding of gospel), (rhythm and blues), and (jazz.)

可是我觉得这个句子的结构应该是这样的:Charles is credited with the early development of soul music, a genre based on (a melding of( gospel, rhythm and blues, and jazz.))

是圣歌音乐 爵士 蓝调的融合 翻译起来也对啊~

(D) 整个句子缺少谓语；a genre…作紧临的名词development的同位语错误。

(E) 整个句子缺少谓语；现在分词melding gospel rhythm and blues与and后面的名词jazz不平行。

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aeoluseros

that's exactly what I think.

syxphoebe

以下是引用guting109在2008-11-24 0:04:00的发言：

 (A) a genre…作紧临的名词development的同位语错误；现在分词melding gospel rhythm and blues与and后面的名词jazz不平行。
                    

(B) being多余；现在分词melding gospel rhythm and blues与and后面的名词jazz不平行。
                    

(C) 正确，a genre…作soul music的同位语，动名词a melding of与and后面的名词jazz平行。

根据这句话 这个句子的结构应该是这样的Charles is credited with the early development of soul music, a genre based on (a melding of gospel), (rhythm and blues), and (jazz.)

可是我觉得这个句子的结构应该是这样的:Charles is credited with the early development of soul music, a genre based on (a melding of( gospel, rhythm and blues, and jazz.))

是圣歌音乐 爵士 蓝调的融合 翻译起来也对啊~

(D) 整个句子缺少谓语；a genre…作紧临的名词development的同位语错误。
                    

(E) 整个句子缺少谓语；现在分词melding gospel rhythm and blues与and后面的名词jazz不平行。
                    

请看黄色注释部分。同意a genre based on (a melding of( gospel, rhythm and blues, and jazz.))。为什么A中说melding。。。和后面的jazz不平行呢？还是因为么melding本来应该是修饰后面所有成分的。而在A中会有歧义单独修饰gospel？

syxphoebe

问题虽然弱了一些 还盼望大家伸把手教教我吧 谢谢谢谢了~

AlienX

X is based on something.
melding A, B, and C vs. a melding of A, B, and C
the former會被看成分詞結構

胖胖胖胖

版主的意思是不是如果用 melding A,B and C，会有melding A与其他成分并列的嫌疑？而如果用 a melding of,那么怎么说都说的过去？

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