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50.Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer?

 

 

 

People have specific and individual attitudes toward dealing things which relate to them. Some of the people have curiosity in exploring new things in spite of potential risks. Some of the people are so traditional that they concentrate merely on the things which they fimilarily understand or which they can easily achieve. As far as I am concerned, tring new things has more benefits than taking risks.

 

 

 

Basically, as one attempt new things, one’s mind and logic are developing by considering every steps thoughtfully. For instance, I never studied photograph before, and I was fasinated by the vivid photos about the lake which portrait a serene life for me. Despite of doing well in photograph is extremely harsh and time-consuming, I still have strong desire to take attractive scenes in daily life. Therefore, I consulted with the professional people and tried to capture the remarkable pictures. In fact, the fulfilment that I accumulate an impressive picture in camera, is more that get high marks in a subject which I have already done well in.

 

 

 

Futhermore, without attemps, people constrain in small fileds that they have already good at, and thus their potential talents may fail to unearth. For example, my friend Klevin often gets high grades in Chemistry, and he firmly believed that he could still do well in the university as him choosing the major. However, after the throughly and comprehensively studying of the specific fields in Chemistry in unversity, he found that he have no curiosity in Chemstry at all, especially when he could not get high marks in exams. Unfortunately, he could not change his major and he even have no superficial knowledge in other new subjects.

 

 

 

In addtion, the risks of trying new things are the enormous failures, the misleading from others and the destroy of self-confidence. I may not photo any good pictures for a long time, and people could not accpet my works. My friend Klevin may not find the suitable subject and back to Chemistry again. If people want to explore new road, they have to prepared well in facing any hardship, which is more tough and tedious that stay in the original situation.

 

 

 

To sum up, due to the reasons mentioned above, we may comfortable to use a proverb to conclude,(I paraphrase it) : Life is a process of studying, always expore and never stop. Bravely and carefully exploration will brings us unexpected knowledge and satisfication.