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13. some people prefer to eat at food stands or restuarants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at hoom, which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

Which place you would like to eat, in some restuarants or at home? Diffrerent people have different answers due to their distinctive personality, experiences,some hobbies and so on. Some people prefer to eat in restuarants because they can enjoy many delicious food they had never tasted. Some people prefer to prepare and eat at home beacause he can eat clean, health food. As far as I am concerned, I would like to eat at home. There are some reasons to be supposed as following:

 

 

Firstly, healthy is the most valuable things for human beings. Eating at home can provide a good health guarantee for us. For example, with development of ecnoomic, people become more and more wealth and have more and more chances to eat in some highclass restuarants with their friends,clients,or families. But most food the resturants supply contains much fat, poteins, or other cleanless things, all of these are bad for people’s healthy if the people eat them in long term. And some diseases will be happened in people’s body. Always a millionnair who suffer from seniors cancer due to eating too much toxic in some restuarants complains that he would devote his expensive properties to buy his healthy. But if you eat at home, I think the situation mentioned above will mever be happened in your life.

 

 

Secondly, I think preparing and eating at home is a very interesting things. When you come back to home after working, you can go to supermarket, buy some vegetable, meat or other things,and then prepare so delicious food to your lover or parents.They can appreciate your love from the food you maked. Maybe this is the most happiness things in the world and also is the best way to improve the emotion between you and your lover or your parents.

 

 

Although eating at home can offer many advantages for us, there are still some people love to eat in some restuarants. When they are travelling to some famous place, they always want to try some delicious foods many notable persons in history had appreciated. I think some resturants is the best choice. But if you want to become more health, or have a very strong body, eating at home is sagacious decision.

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chenli198232

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