og-173，关于run-on

halcyon · 发表于 2004-1-24 11:28:00

173. Joan of Arc, a young Frenchwoman who claimed to be divinely inspired, turned the tide of English victories in her country by liberating the city of Orleans and she persuaded Charles VII of France to claim his throne.
(A) she persuaded Charles VII of France to claim his throne
(B) persuaded Charles VII of France in claiming his throne
(C) persuading that the throne be claimed by Charles VII of France
(D) persuaded Charles VII of France to claim his throne
(E) persuading that Charles VII of France should claim the throne
In choice A, turned... and she persuaded is needlessly wordy and lacks the compact parallelism of turned... and persuaded.

为什么这句的 A ， og 不认为 run-on 呢？？？

snow_mountain · 发表于 2004-1-24 16:18:00

偶上学那会，讲run-on 是两个独立的句子用逗号连接，缺了 and, or 等等。

http://www.google.com.sg/search?q=cache:afw4WWZkthYJ:webster.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm+run-on+sentence&hl=en&ie=UTF-8

海蓝 · 发表于 2004-1-24 21:59:00

A就是run-on啊～～～og忘了说了吧～～

hougang · 发表于 2004-12-19 10:57:00

同意runvon

lpdeng · 发表于 2008-8-25 12:29:00

形容词 run-on:

(verse) without a rhetorical pause between lines

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