OG11-102

charlie6989

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
 (A)    Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B)    In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C)    In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D)    Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E)    Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

Ans:C

1.E.Them cannot refer to book illustrations because the plural noun is the object of the preposition in
为何E不可指代 illustrations??
2. A. The modifying elements are poorly placed and leave the subject too far from the verb
要怎判定其远近？？

littlesharon

这句话什么意思，没看明白。

charlie6989

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lemoncandya

以下是引用charlie6989在2008-9-16 16:20:00的发言：
Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
 (A)    Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B)    In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C)    In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D)    Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E)    Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

Ans:C

1.E.Them cannot refer to book illustrations because the plural noun is the object of the preposition in
为何E不可指代 illustrations??

同问
2. A. The modifying elements are poorly placed and leave the subject too far from the verb
要怎判定其远近？？

中间有插入语隔开就不叫近了，但是隔一个算不算远要具体情况具体分析

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