请教prep-160，谢谢：）

moonlightle

160.  (33567-!-item-!-188;#058&006988)
            

 

 

She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements as well, so one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
            

 

 

(A) She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements as well, so one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
            

(B) She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, and Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one of the best-known and well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century.
            

(C) As an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, Nannie Helen Burroughs was one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century.
            

(D) As an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, one of the best-known and well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
            

(E) Being an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
            

b项错误的原因不是很明白，破解笔记说是and also表递进，查看了以前的帖子说she 不能出现在名字之前，可是这两种错误og都没明确指出来过啊~~

b项错误的原因不是很明白，破解笔记说是and also表递进，查看了以前的帖子说she 不能出现在名字之前，可是这两种错误og都没明确指出来过啊~~

rock19840717

我选C，对吗

emilyzouduff

以下是引用moonlightle在2008-9-13 7:29:00的发言：

160.  (33567-!-item-!-188;#058&006988)
   

 

 

 

She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements as well, so one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
   

 

 

 

(A) She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements as well, so one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
   

(B) She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, and Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one of the best-known and well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century.
   

(C) As an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, Nannie Helen Burroughs was one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century.
   

(D) As an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, one of the best-known and well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
   

(E) Being an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, one of the best-known and most well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century was Nannie Helen Burroughs.
   

b项错误的原因不是很明白，破解笔记说是and also表递进，查看了以前的帖子说she 不能出现在名字之前，可是这两种错误og都没明确指出来过啊~~

b项错误的原因不是很明白，破解笔记说是and also表递进，查看了以前的帖子说she 不能出现在名字之前，可是这两种错误og都没明确指出来过啊~~

b项错误的原因不是很明白，破解笔记说是and also表递进，查看了以前的帖子说she 不能出现在名字之前，可是这两种错误og都没明确指出来过啊~~

我 觉得是错在She was an educator, a builder of institutions and organizations, and a major figure in the Black church and secular feminist movements, and Nannie Helen Burroughs also was one of the best-known and well-respected African Americans of the early twentieth century.

这个感觉是主语赘述的毛病，就像是Nannie Helen Burroughs.......and she was一个道理

帮你顶，还望大家多讨论~~

冯澄宁

bc都可以表达句意，但b啰嗦

gsj677

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小困蛇

It should be c.

If you go through the OG, you will start to recognize that this kind of sentence should be either
Nannie Helen Burroughs was one of the best-known… , modifier.
or
Modifier, Nannie Helen Burroughs was one of the best-known…

a) wordy
b) wordy
c) correct
technically, this choice is not perfect either: in some dictionaries you’ll find that as an educator should be as educator (like as lawyer, as doctor). I don’t agree with this answer-choice completely, but who cares b/c this test has its own rules
d) not one of the two correct forms
e) wordy + being is bad

You asked why can't "as an educator..." modify "one of the....?" I guess the best answer is they said so.

yangmars

请问如果C中的as去掉的话，这个句子还是对的吗？

sunyan730

去不去掉as要根据语意来看。

suapplle

虽然是两年前的帖子了，但是B选项还是不怎么懂••••请牛牛帮忙, 谢谢！

suapplle

再顶一下〜