请教GWD第4套一题

endlessfrenz

Q33:

The global-warming effect of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used for predicting how rising greenhouse gas concentrations could affect climate.

 

1. The global-warming effect of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used for predicting
2. The effect on global warming of ocean white caps are one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet incorporated in any detail into computer models, which they use to predict
3. The effect of ocean white caps on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment that are not yet incorporated in any detail into the computer models used to predict
4. That ocean white caps have an effect on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet having been incorporated in any detail into the computer models that are used for predicting
5. That ocean white caps have an effect on global warming is one of the many aspects of the ocean environment not yet being incorporated in any detail into computer models, which they use to predict

这道题的答案选择C, 可是我觉得C中that are not yet incorporated in any detail这个短语的修饰部分有争议,有可能会是修饰最接近它的名词 the ocean environment , 而D就避免了这个错误, 直接用动词的分词形式修饰主句的主语啊,.所以我觉得应该选D啊,可是为什么不对呢?

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Q34:

The market for recycled commodities like aluminum and other metals remain strong despite economic changes in the recycling industry.

 

1. commodities like aluminum and other metals remain
2. commodities like those of aluminum and other metals are remaining
3. commodities such as aluminum and other metals remains
4. commodities, such as aluminum and other metals, remain
5. commodities, like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, remains

这道题目选E, 但是我认为这里是举例,应该用SUCH AS 而不用LIKE, 因为LIKE不是做比较吗, 这里没有东西和它们比较啊,如果你说是recycled commodities的话,那也应该是Like the commodities of aluminum and other metals, the recycled commodities for the market remains strong despite....啊,所以是哪里错了呢?

dianecarton

Q33 C。D的问题更多，is位置不对，having been incorporated不对，be used for doing不优。

Q34 C

所以我同意第二道选C，like做例举就不怎么好，然后other matals前面少个of，而且整个句子啰嗦，重复commodities干嘛？句子也没有歧义，wordy.个人观点而已。

AlienX

33: D改了原意...is vs. have.
34.C/E在語法上都可以...只是這句是想舉examples...所以要用such as...傾向E