求助NN--GWD争议一题另解

zhushanyi

（1）     GWD-1-Q2:×

By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.

 

1. their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging

2. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

3. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging

4. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges

5. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges

通常都在BE纠结，但是我很神奇的选了D。我的思路是increase in the share词组，后再加 FROM TO 结构，参考OG11版44题：The antomotive conveyor-belt sysem,which henry ford modeled after an assembly-line technique introduced by Ransom Olds,reduced
                the time required to assemble a Model T from T
                from a day and a half to 93 minutes. 解释中强调reduce后不能直接加from TO.

robinymph

我和楼主同样思路，我也选的D。可是答案是C吧。

AlienX

不會是C, 因為C的their沒有指的對象
Longman Dictionary:
increase (something) from/to something
所以B的用法是可以的
E的increase to X from Y的用法在財經newspaper上非常常見.
個人傾向E因為which的關係.
莫老師給的answer is B tho.

zhushanyi

答案是E，说include要和market配合

AlienX

支持B的人, 可能看過原文(在nytimes上, 可是有點不一樣), 也有可能覺得which可以修market.
個人還是支持E.

zhushanyi

请教,那这和OG上面强调的REQUIRE之后不加FROM TO结构有没有矛盾呢，做题目的时候怎么分辨主要矛盾呢

rorochen

b

AlienX

hmm...OG的那題有點不一樣.
因為OG那道沒有which指代問題.
如果有3個choices:
B. By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country.
E. By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market.
F. By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase its share of the $21 billion book market in the country from 6 percent to 10 percent.
F看上去會像OG那題.
我會覺得B比較好, 因為6%跟10%是講"its share of..."
F的its share of the $21 billion book market in the country太長, 看到from的時候還要回頭看什麼是from 6% to 10%.  是$21 billion book market? the share?
E的country's不太好...
OG那道是reduced the time required to assemble a Model T from a day and a half to 93 minutes. "a day and a half" and "93 minutes"是時間, 前面只有"the time"是可修對象.
正常語敍是好in general, 可是要看句子...?

VideoHead

我觉得可能还是因为e选项的which指代更加清晰，修饰the country逻辑意思上肯定是错误的，如果是修饰前面的内容，那就很不直接，也不唯一了。