一月JJ AI NO29的疑问

寂寞的自由

29. “太多的人只想到得到结果。成功的关键是注意手边的特定事情而不担心结果。”（没写呢）(一月JJ 2004年)  （频率3次）
“Too many people think only about getting results. The key to success, however, is to focus on the specific task at hand and not to worry about results.”
What do you think this piece of advice means, and do you think that it is, on the whole, worth following? Support your views with reasons and/or examples drawn from your own experience, observations, or reading.

这个题目，自由准备采取两边倒的态度，就是说，对作者的观点部分同意，部分保持质疑同时提出自己的观点。不完全反对，也不完全支持。请问大家，这样采取的两边倒的态度写作文，第一段和最后一段应该采取怎样的英文摸板比较好呢？感谢大家的热心帮助

ninaluan

第一段可以讲两边观点都说一遍，就像模板说的那样some people believe that ....., while other people feel that ,,,,,，然后写自己的想法是个combination.(比如：However, I think that  XX and XX are not absolutely opposite. Therefore I agree that.....)这句话可能不对，就是这个意思！

最后一段可以写成Summary， 比如due to above-mentioned reason, we could conclude that... both A and B are equal important to success.
反正我觉得和现成的模板差不多！拙见，别笑我！