[求助]GWD全31第6套第16题，疑点重重不知如何是好了大牛小牛都进来看看

kemo1293

Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.

1. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also

2. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also

3. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also

4. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also

5. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it

不知以前有没有人问过，反正我是郁闷了，答案说选B，某XDF老师说是A

首先如果用not only...but also...的话前后就应该是递进关系，可看原文的意思，前句在说好处，后句在说坏处，这应该是转折关系，所以以本人拙见not only...but also...同时出现的都应该视为错项

于是我就想选E，可是又有人说E中giving是现在分词作伴随状语修饰了前面整个句子，而其实是the systematic clearing of forests发出的动作。

再于是我就真的不知道选什么好了。。。望哪位大侠指一条明路。。。

亦或者这是一道横看成岭侧成峰的题谁也出来招呼一声谢谢

kemo1293

没有人做到过吗？

yezi870514

e 是肯定不对,我认为选b,

Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.

1. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also

2. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also

3. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also

4. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also

5. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it

a,but also，一般不会拆开使用成but it also, not only 的倒装，gave应用give,前面已经出现了did

c,d, e,not only...but also不全  一定是错的

kemo1293

问题在于not only...but also...不是用于某种递进关系的吗？可原文里的前后句明显是种转折关系吧。。。这样也可以用吗？

KennyChenzju

A错在gave，B的but also后面句子结构不完整。C和E明显不对，create farmland和give consumers inexpensive hourse and furniture是并列。

D没有递进结构，而是but的转折，大家评评D有什么不妥

neilwang

？？

zliycwn1

以下是引用kemo1293在2008-8-23 16:26:00的发言：
Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.

1. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also not only位置应该在create之前，but it also的it也应该省略 但我有疑问是如果否定放句首倒装，是不是只要倒部分就可以了 其实这个create是过去时 但是这个过去时放在了did上所以出现原形，后面的gave受不受前面did的影响呢？
   

2. Not only did the systematic clearing of forests in the United States create farmland (especially in the Northeast), which gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also which在语法上指代farmland不合理吧 应该是这个clearing of forests能带来balbalba

3. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States, creating farmland (especially in the Northeast) and giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but also but also之前没有谓语

4. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also 我觉得这个是正确的，but作为转折连词

5. The systematic clearing of forests in the United States not only created farmland (especially in the Northeast), giving consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it 有了not only就要有but also 或者but 后面那个it多余；如果but 作为转折连词，not only就没东西搭配

拙见...请指正！

cynthia628

看到一个帖子解释not only...but also... & not only...but...的区别，虽然区别很细微，但是还是有的。

(1) "not only ... but also ..." is used to refer to two descriptions that REINFORCE each other (i.e., both have the same connotation -- two good things, two bad things, two helpful things, etc.), but are fundamentally independent.
ex:
this drug is not only an alertness aid, but also an antidepressant.
--> "alertness aid" and "antidepressant" are TWO GOOD THINGS that have basically NOTHING TO DO WITH EACH OTHER.
therefore, "not only ... but also".

(2) "not only ... but ..." is also used to refer to two descriptions that REINFORCE each other, but it's generally used when the second description EXPANDS or GOES BEYOND the first.
ex:
ryan not only competed in all the events, but won first prize in three of them.
--> note that "won first prize in three of [the events]" is an EXTENSION of "compet[ing] in all the events". these are not independent.
所以这两个结构连接的东西都是表示相同方向的。正如lz所说，本题前面说的是好的，后面说的是不好的，所以有这两个结构的都排除，ABE。C中but前面是fragment sentence，可以排除。最后剩下D，but表示语意的转折，also就看作一个副词（这里有些同学可能看到只有but also没有not only就把D给排除了，其实这里不是一个短语，拆开来看，but是连词，also是副词），it优先指代主语the systematic clearing，and连接连个并列动词created和gave,所以D选项的表达很清晰。
通过这个题可以看出，做SC不要光看结构，语意最重要。先语意后结构，不要看到not only...but also...平行结构就选了，还得先分析语意哦！