GWD2-39请教

blove001

Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to
cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing
the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more
localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and
unaffected areas of the skin.

            

A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it

heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting

            

B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and
stiffness until it has healed, sunburn generates a more localized
response in the body, which results instead

            

C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling
and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized
response in the body, one resulting

            

D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured
area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn
results

            

E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until

healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results

答案是D。请问E为什么不对？谢谢！

blove001

不知道这两种用法是可以的吗？

1. until healing
2. Unlike A, instead, B ...


答案D里面it has healed用了完成时态，依据是什么呢？谢谢！

Norgar

ding!

对 这 题 D中 用 的 完 成 时 态 不 理 解 .

盼 NN来 指 点 迷 津 .

WesternCder

以下是引用blove001在2008-7-26 0:10:00的发言：
Unlike the body’s inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
  
A. with widespread swelling and stiffness immobilizing the injured area until it heals, the body’s response to sunburn is more localized and resulting

B. where the injured area is immobilized with widespread swelling and stiffness until it has healed, sunburn
                generates a more localized response in the body, which results instead

C. with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting
 
D. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results
  
E. in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results

答案是D。请问E为什么不对？谢谢！

healing 这里的逻辑主语应为 the injured area，实际上没welling and stiffness

msuzengli

 in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until healing, instead, the body’s more localized response to sunburn results

E答案不合理的地方一大堆.

首先healing的逻辑主语模糊,时态也不对;

其次unlike..., instead,...这样的用法就很不合逻辑;

最后the body's more...和the body's inflammatory对不上.

wangjing7

the body’s more localized response 和the body’s inflammatory response完全对的上，不明白LS所言。

xyredpoppy

没什么对不上的呀，我觉得对的挺好的~

amorette

unlike 和 instead 好象重复了吧

Invanka

My answer is D

resulting- wrong verb tense - eliminates A,C

E - instead [redundant use of Unlike, already being used for contrast]

B - which cannot modify body

Hope this helps...