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rpch2004

GWD26-Q24 关于跳跃修饰

According to United States census data, while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.
  
            

 

 

 

 

A.     while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.

B.      there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home in 1975; in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home

C.     in 1975 about one-third of mothers with young children worked outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home

D.     even though in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

E.      with about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

答案为C，D错在who worked outside 修饰children逻辑错误

我当时选D的理由是：

这里的with young children 可不可以看成一个介词短语，然后who ....跳跃修饰前面的名词mothers ？？

sharon213

In terms of physics, the characteristic feature of the roller  coaster  is that  the cars'   potential  energy,   gained   through  their  being  lifted   by   a  chain   drive    through   the  Earth's  gravity  to  the  top  of  the  first  drop  ,

has been  converted  to  kinetic   energy  by  the  time the  ride   ends.

A    cars' potential  energy  ,  gained  through their  being  lifted  by  a  chain  drive

B    cars' potential  energy ,   a gain  achieved  as  they  are lifted  by a  chain  drive

C    potential  energy  from  the  cars'  being  lifted  by a chain  drive

D    potential  energy   of  the  cars , gained  as  a  chain  drive   lifts  them

E     potential   energy   gained   by  the   cars , being   achieved  while  a chain  drive  lifts  them

答案是D  我不懂的是解释里提到  -ed分词gained跳过介词短语of the  cars修饰potential  energy 

为什么这里不能用-ed分词可能就近修饰介词短语of the cars逻辑意思不合理  来作为排除D的理由？？

最近复习貌似总是遇见类似的问题 有时可以用就近修饰导致逻辑意思不合理来排除某个选项

有时却在答案的补充说明里提到是属于跳跃修饰

那么到底该怎么去判断呢？

这里是-ed分词的跳跃修饰，和that从句有没有同点呢？

这题有该怎么理解呢？

dingxiang

以下是引用rpch2004在2008-7-23 23:52:00的发言：

GWD26-Q24 关于跳跃修饰

According to United States census data, while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.
  
   

 

 

 

 

 

A.     while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.

B.      there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home in 1975; in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home

C.     in 1975 about one-third of mothers with young children worked outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home

D.     even though in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

E.      with about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

答案为C，D错在who worked outside 修饰children逻辑错误

我当时选D的理由是：

这里的with young children 可不可以看成一个介词短语，然后who ....跳跃修饰前面的名词mothers ？？

我不同意你的理解： 我认为D不是错在定从的指代，注意到这里是限制性定从， 其特点我之前说过是指代中心词的， 介词结构with young children 并不影响定从的指代， 定从是指代mothers的，没有问题。 但D最关键的错误，在于， there were句型， 非常awkward, 而且更严重的是逻辑意思的错误，如果你仔细看原句，原句用的是while从句表对比，表示对比， 而C自说自话改为了even though从句表转折， 严重的扭曲逻辑意思。

C 的正确性：

1）完美的平行 ，两个分句的结构平行， 各个成分的位置平行，意思平行。

 
                in 1975
                about one-third of mothers 【with young children】 worked （outside the home）; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers
                were employed  （outside the home ）

2）从OG的例子来看， 分号是ETS偏爱的选项。（如果需要举例，我可以补充）

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