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发表于 2008-7-13 13:03:00 | 只看该作者

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Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very
carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time.
Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not
making plans. Which do you prefer
planning or not
planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain
your choice.


    

 


    

If next
week is your vacation, how are you going to spend this week? Spending the whole
week with a detailed travel plan or having a leisure vacation without any
plan?  If I were you, I would choose to
have a fully prepared vacation. An organized life is more enjoyable, I believe.


    

 


    

First of
all, only after making a good plan can we optimize our free time. Today, we are
all living a fast-pace life which vacation is limited and even luxury to us. If
I got a free time, as a result, I would rather to try my best to plan it
and so no time will be wasted on unnecessary
or trivial matters. In my case, by making advance reserve on hotels and planes
for my travel, I always enjoy my vacation without extra trivial. My goal is to
maximum the value of our free time.  


    

 


    

Moreover,
it is an efficient plan that make us really get what we want and enjoy the
precious free time. Everybody has desires to do something which needs a long
free time, such as travel to a resort, finish reading a book, or make a whole
family reunion. How to make these wishes come true? My answer would be “plan
it, do it and get it”.


    

 


    

Of cause,
it’s fun to do something without a plan. Surprise always comes with an
unprepared schedule. Once I walked around on a weekend, and ended up finding a
new bookstore near my house, which is my favorite one.


    

 


    

Although
spending a free time without plan has its undeniable advantage, we still can
find out that the advantages of planning for leisure time overweight those of
not planning. In short, making plan is good for our life.


沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-13 13:09:00 | 只看该作者
自己先顶一下,一个朋友帮忙看过后,说我整篇都在说圈话,我已经很努力在写一篇脉胳清晰的文章的,这篇真的很差吗?
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