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Have a steady life or look forward to new experience?

 

When faced with the argument about having a steady life
            is better or looking forward to new experience is, someone believes that new experience’s advantage means nothing when a steady’s advantages are mentioned, I doubt whether the argument bears much analysis. In some areas, they may be right about their idea, but they seem to neglect to mention the fact that looking forward to new experience is an important way to success. Contrary to generally accepted views, I hold that looking forward to new experience is better than having a steady life.

 

The main reason for my propensity for new experience is that it makes people courageous. We may quote a single example of Abraham Lincoln. He found new experience during his great life. He failed elections many times but none of them can depress him. The instance is not unique; it is one of many examples I have heard.

 

Another reason can be seen by everyone is that is Bill Gates. If he hadn’t dropped out of Harvard, Microsoft would have set up successfully? As far as I am concerned, looking forward to new life makes Lincoln and Gates become brilliant men.

 

A recent survey taken by officials indicates that people gradually recognize the importance of looking new experience. The number was 35 percent, more than a half of the 2006 total. So there is absolutely to accept that looking forward to new experience is becoming current. The change is due to the fact that new experiences is not only exciting but also improve ourselves.

 

Moreover, the advantages for looking new experience cause lots of changes in people’s life, and also play an important role in the society. Just think, if we had lost A, what would have happened?

 

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that looking forward to new experience is better, although steady life brings you a mild attitude.