开头段:In this argument,the author endorsed the recommendation/conclusion/sugesstion that….In support of the conclusion/… the author cites/offer the reason that…;Moreover,the author claims that …;Finally, the grouns provided for supporting/granting the conclusion/… is that… This argument is questionable and unconvincing with obscure,oversimplified and unwarranted claims for several reasons. 中间段(三段) To begin/start with,the author assumes that…While this is a tempting assumption,it seems to be problemetic and doubtful because/for the reason that… In the second place,the author presumes/supposes/provides the presumption that… However/ Neverthless,lacking/in short of practical/concrete evidence stating clearly/ indicating/ illustrating that…the author’s standpoint/claim/generalization is unreliable/ unauthentic. Finally,the author holds the viewpoint that ….One patent rejoinder /rebut to the line of reasoning is that…Obviously,it’s a failure for the author to establish a logic connection between…and …This in turn leaves open the possibility that… 结尾段 As it stands,this is a problemetic argument because the author ignores the fact that… To substantiate the conclusion/… the author should provide/furnish adequate evidence to show that … and to illustrate/make sure that… |