[求助]10号考试，刚写的一篇作文，求指正！（写的很烂！）

LEEOP

Nowadays, there is an increasing population of people who keep pets. From my point of view, pets should be treated as family members in that their character in daily life has changed a lot.

In the first place, pets do not act as guards at all. More and more people keep pets to company with them, especially the old. Young people are always busy with their work and they also have their own families. In such cases, they will not have enough time to visit their parents. The old can only keep pets to reduce their lonely and empty. Also, according to some researches, it is said that keeping pets can help the old reduce the risk of getting heart diseases. Pets bring such benefits to us and they deserve to be treated as family members.

In the second place, animals are our friends and we have the responsibility to protect them, let alone such cute pets. They are weak compared to us and there exists phenomenon in some places that some people dare to eat them. Imaging that your lovely dog disappeared some day and never came back again, how sad you will be. So, treat them as your family members now and protect them.

Also, I have ever heard the news that a pet dog saved his baby master and it died in the fire. I have to mention that pets are always loyal to us and they even can exchange their master's lives with their own. In my opinion, they have considered themselves as your family members and treasured you much more than themselves. As the most intelligent things in the world, we should do something to reward our lovely friends. So, treat them as your family members.

To draw a conclusion, we can not live without each other and we are all blended into both's life.