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兄弟姐们,请拍拍偶的作文,万分感谢

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发表于 2008-2-29 23:09:00 | 只看该作者

兄弟姐们,请拍拍偶的作文,万分感谢

写的是10 15 的机经 

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.For someone who wants to be successful in the society, knowledge gained form study is more important than the ability of being creative.

 It,appears ,in so many aspects,difficult to make a choice which is more important when an individual achieve the ideality between konowledge attained form class and the spirit of creation.Depending on distinctive cultural backgrounde and individual experirnce,different people will hold varied perspectives,From my viw of point,it is more reasonable to agree with the assertion that gaining the konwledge from study take precedence over creative spirit when people want to become successful.
   The main point presented to develop my propensity is konwledge is the foundation of success,it provides the basic needs for the normal people ,Suppose that the success isssue is skyscraper meanwhile it’s the knowledge should be the foundation which sustain the building.The knowledge we assimilate from study help us to develop our own temperament and cultivate personal sentiment,which has significant position in the application of job ,a special means of success for the graduate students.At the circumstance ,it is rational to advocate the viepoint knowledge is moe essential.
   In addtiom, another equally important aspect can be obviously seen .It provide an opportunity for people to establish a sense of cooperation,subsequently, we can share the interesting minds with the group through the contents we have learned from class.To a large extent,it can lead to a convenient way to attain success.The  reasons above demostrate my inclination beyond any doubt.
   However, I do not want to overstate the merits of knowledge,since the creative spirit has its comparative advantages.Firstly,it’s very crucial for the people undertake the sense to boost the competitivenesswhen achieve the ideality.Secondly,it can genegrate the useful imaginations which are essential for human society,leading the scholars to be successful.
   To sum up, the discussion is indeedly complex, requring subjective judgment.From all the discussion above,we can safely draw the conclusion kowledge is more important than creative spirit on account that it promote the communication capacity which is useful for the individual achievement,though the creation sense has its own merits.

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