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拜托各位高人指点一下,给小弟的T作文拍砖!题目TWE074

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发表于 2008-2-20 11:39:00 | 只看该作者

拜托各位高人指点一下,给小弟的T作文拍砖!题目TWE074

题目:TWE 074         the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide

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According to a survey provided by the Internet, people in increasing number hold the belief that the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Some people, who are opposite to the belief, argue that it isn't the best way, considering the negative points it brings along. However, each coin has two sides. Contrary to the people mentioned above, others, advocates of the belief, claim that the weaknesses of this way sound ridiculous when the positive respect of it is taken into consideration. As I view the controversy, I agree with the latter. Because it will be securer to travel with a tour guide and we won't miss any wonderful interests.

In the first place, no one will deny the self-evident opinion that tour guides will make our trip safer than we travel ourselves, since they are familiar with the trip line. Only when we travel with an experienced tour guide, can we avoid any dangerous accidents in the vocation. For example, my friend Joe, who used to travel alone, often lost in her way back and had to call for security official's help. Due to the advice of her classmates, now she often travel in groups which are led by an humorous guide and never lose in her trip. Besides the familiar example of my friend, numerous evidence points the idea mentioned above. All available cases lend support to the view that we should travel with tour guides, which will make sure we will be safe in the trip.

In addition, obviously reasonable though the idea claiming that it will save money if we travel with a guide is, it should not be ignored. The effect of tour guides is heightened by the particular advantage that trips with guides enjoy. Conducted by scientists recently, one nationwide investigation demonstrates that, by comparison with 1990, the amount of money which is spent by travelers on travel has nearly halved, while in the same period increases the number of travel group led by tour guides. The significant change, occurring in the past few years, results from the fact that tour guides can easily order hotels and restaurants cheaper than we book them just by ourselves. Thus, when people doubt whether we should travel with tour guides, isn't it necessary that they give more consideration to the huge number of money that it saves?

Numerous though the benefits that trips with tour guides cause are, people should not neglect the drawbacks that it brings about. First of all, it does take a lot of time to travel with tour guides. Additionally, though it can save a lot of money, who is going to deny that almost every traveler is forced to go shopping during the trip by tour guides? Furthermore, tour guide can make us safe, but under this circumstance we will miss many fantastic interests which will be a little risky.

To sum up, due to the aforementioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single of them, we may safely arrive the conclusion that travel in a group with tout guides is better than any other way of travel. In order to make our trip more colorful, we must take measures to enhance tour guides' skill and strictly govern tour agencies.

希望大家拍啊,快考试了心里急呢,谢谢大家!!


[此贴子已经被作者于2008-2-25 22:55:23编辑过]
沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-2-25 22:49:00 | 只看该作者

有人看没人拍啊,大家猛力拍

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-3-11 23:38:00 | 只看该作者
高人们,不要吝啬你们的砖~砖头,向我的作文上拍去!
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