3月2日就上战场拉,有劳改一下拉~

tyn

 

 ECOTOURISM

I might be one of the many people who are enjoying a relatively new mode of travel known as ecotourism.As the name implies,ecotourism focuses on conserving the ecology and natural heritage of tourist destinations.In addition ,ecotourism features indigenous cultures and promotes ways for local communities to control and maintain their resources.Absolutely speaking I love ecotourism .In the following passages,I will use some special examples to illustrate why I love it so much.

First of all,the ecotourism has none of these problems that vacationers experienced.In the past,vacationers usually spent their time staying at luxury hotels and visting famous landmarks and museums in cities such as New York ,Paris and Tokyo .Others preffered to relax on the beautiful beaches of Hawaii or the deck of a cruise ship in the sunny Caribbean.There was little interaction with the local people and overcrowding often spoilded the natural beauty of popular vacation spots .In addition ,excessive commercialization turned many places into tourist traps.

Secondly, Developing alongside a global rise in environmental consciousness and respect for cultural diversity ,ecotourism is the one of the fastest growing sectors of the travel and tourist industry. ecotourism is the one of the fastest growing sectors of the travel and tourist industry Since the early 1980s ,however,adventure-oriented and nature-based vacation activities have become increasingly popular. .Mountain climbing in the Himalayas,roughing it on a wilderness expedition,trekking in the Amazon rainforest and whale watching on the high seas are attractive alternatives to the urbancomforts of five-star hotels and classy restaurants.

Last but not least, ecotourism means more than just traveling to remote destinations.The concept also emphasizes educating visitors about local people ,customs and cultural heritage. Perhaps most importantly,it involves a methodical approach to tourism that minimizes the negative impact on natural habitats and gives host communities a leading role in decisiion-making processes,along with the lion’s share of economic benefits.

 To put it in a nutshell, tourism might be the largest industry in the world,what is more,it is a sustainable growth strategy that is adopted to ensure that our natural and cultural heritage is preserved for the enjoyment and benefit of future generations.These are the reasons why i am a big fan of ecotourism.

 

 

kevin3

老指望别人改不行，自己也得帮别人。老兄你跟我同日上战场，我就来改上一改，如有不对还请指正。

I might be one of those people who are enjoying a relatively new travlling pattern which is known as ecotourism.As the name implies,ecotourism focuses on preserving the ecosystem while having fun.In addition ,ecotourism features indigenous cultures and promotes ways for local communities to maintain their natural assets.Absolutely,I love ecotourism .In the following passages,I will use some special examples to illustrate why I love it so much.

First of all,the ecotourism has none of the following problems that vacationers experience.In the past,vacationers usually spent their time staying at luxury hotels and visting famous landmarks and museums in cities such as New York ,Paris and Tokyo .Others preferred to relax on the beautiful beaches of Hawaii or the deck of a cruise ship in the sunny Caribbean.There was little interaction with the local people and overcrowding often spoilded the original beauty of popular vacation spots .what's more,excessive commercialization makes defraud a common phenomenon.

Second, Development alongside a global rise environmental consciousness and respect for cultural diversity ,ecotourism is the one of the fastest growing travelling industry. Since early 1980s adventure-oriented and nature-based vacation have become increasingly popular.Mountain climbing,wilderness expedition,trekking in the Amazon rainforest and whale watching on the seas are attractive alternatives to the urbancomforts of luxury hotels and classy restaurants.

Last but not least, ecotourism means more than just traveling to remote destinations.It also functions imparting local customs and cultural heritage. Perhaps most importantly,it involves a approach to tourism that minimizes the negative impact on natural resorts and gives host communities a large amount of profit.

 In a nutshell, ecotourism is a sustainable developing pattern that can ensure our natural and cultural heritage is preserved for future generations.These are the reasons why i am a big fan of ecotourism.

jasonou

 ECOTOURISM

I might( tense should be present) be one of the many (delete it) people who are enjoying a relatively new mode of travel known as ecotourism.As the name implies,ecotourism focuses on conserving the ecology and natural heritage of tourist destinations.In addition ,ecotourism features indigenous cultures and promotes ways for local communities to control and maintain their resources.Absolutely speaking I love ecotourism ( what is your object?) .In the following passages,I will use some special examples to illustrate why I love it so much.

First of all,the ecotourism has none of these( where is the subjects?what problems? I need to stop here to think, but still not figure out it yet) problems that vacationers experienced.In the past,vacationers
                (you mean travelers?)usually spent their time staying at luxury hotels and visting famous landmarks and museums in cities such as New York ,Paris and Tokyo( Do you ever go to those citys? I am doubt about this opinion!) .Others preffered (one f!)to relax on the beautiful beaches of Hawaii or the deck of a cruise ship in the sunny Caribbean.( are you actually writing ?I think it looks like the normal talking. try to use the formal languages!) There was little interaction with the local people and overcrowding often spoilded the natural beauty of popular vacation spots .In addition ,excessive commercialization turned many places into tourist traps.

Secondly, Developing alongside a global rise in environmental consciousness and respect for cultural diversity ,ecotourism is the one of the fastest growing sectors of the travel and tourist industry. ecotourism is the one of the fastest growing sectors of the travel and tourist industry Since the early 1980s ,however,adventure-oriented and nature-based vacation activities have become increasingly popular. .Mountain climbing in the Himalayas,roughing it on a wilderness expedition,trekking in the Amazon rainforest and whale watching on the high seas are attractive alternatives to the urbancomforts of five-star hotels and classy restaurants.

Last but not least, ecotourism means more than just traveling to remote destinations.The concept also emphasizes educating visitors about local people ,customs and cultural heritage. Perhaps most importantly,it involves a methodical approach to tourism that minimizes the negative impact on natural habitats and gives host communities a leading role in decisiion-making processes,along with the lion’s share of economic benefits.

 To put it in a nutshell, tourism might be the largest industry in the world,what is more,it is a sustainable growth strategy that is adopted to ensure that our natural and cultural heritage is preserved for the enjoyment and benefit of future generations.These are the reasons why i am a big fan of ecotourism.

  Good! Just Try to use formal language! You should do the proofreading for your gramma and spelling

  Good! Just Try to use formal language! You should do the proofreading for your gramma and spelling