annfeifei:
not really, I used a lot help from my colleageues and some friends who went to the schools before. They said my wordings need to be more professional. so edit a couple times. But I feel it is real me.
jeanwan:
you have to show passion to Columbia. Otherwise, like someone said before, if you get higher GMAT, does not mean you can get in, but you get lower GMAT, definitely you know you will be out. similar thing here. if you show passionate as anyone else, does not mean you get in, but if you do not show you will definitely out. Why applied then. anyway, that is what I heard Columbia is really really impressed by this. They kind of obsessed with themselves.
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