求助，一个essay的问题

yoyo2007

在精华的帖子里没发现。
题目如下：

    

Explain how you will contribute both
as a student and subsequently as an alum to the XXX
                    Graduate
                    School of Business
community. What importance do you place on this contribution and what qualities
do you possess that will make you effective in these roles?

                

                

    

yoyo2007

拜托各位走过路过，给点小建议就行。

Thanks a lot in advance!

Treasureup

My two cents:

what qualities you possess,就从这个入手，然后再结合具体的club,organization呀之类谈谈你能做些什么来使得他们变得更好！！！

Good luck!

mrsyue

Stern 的吧, 我就是因为这篇ESSAY放弃申请这个学校的, 帮你顶顶...

yoyo2007

谢谢！