以下是引用yzlinlin在2003-12-16 2:27:00的发言: 1. the following editorial appeared in the south fork gazette. “last year, the city contracted with flower power to plant a variety of flowers in big decorative pots on main street and to water them each week. by mid-summer, many of the plants were wilted. this year, the city should either contract for two waterings a week or save money by planting artificial flowers in the pots. according to flower power, the initial cost for artificial flowers would be twice as much as for real plants, but after two years, we would come out ahead. public reaction certainly supports this position: in a recent survey, over 1,200 gazette readers said that the city wastes money and should find ways to reduce public spending.” discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.
First, the author failed to establish the causal relationship between wilted flower and lack of water. Second, two waterings a week do not guarantee the flourish of flowers. Third, the public's opinion to reduce public spending does not justify the purchasing of artificial flower. Moreover, the author fails to illustrate that artificial flower do cost less than real flowers. |