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发表于 2007-12-17 21:16:00 | 只看该作者

[求助] 第一片作文, 希望大家指点!!!!!

When confronted with this question ,different people will have different opinions based on thire preference concern and styles of personality .Some people may chose to buy a house ,meanwhile other people prefer to buy a business.Personally ,I would be ,probably always be,  one of those who prefer to buy a business.My arguments are as following .

 

To begin with ,the main reason for my propensity for buy a business is that i like to do business ,since i was young ,of course ,still love to do business now ,and I have dramed to have a business myself oneday .I remember that when I graduate from the high school I tried to go to university to learn business. However ,I did not succeed and I had to make with the second best ,to learn math . When was a university student ,I always go to business classes ,though my major was math .So if I have a chance to set a business myself ,never hesitate i will.

 

In the second place ,I chose to buy a business also because that though set a business I could help a lot of relatives and friend ,I can help them eran more money and make thire life easier .I have several relatives and some good friends, who do not have jobs . Thire life are not very difficult ,because thire income is so limited due to having no jobs .So ,if I can set a business,then though helping them to set smaller business or find jobs in my company , I could do them a big favor ,of course.

 

Finally ,there is another reason for my inclination for buying  a business .If i buy a business ,I will run it continuously ,then i will make more  money.Also I can contribute a large sum of ravenues to the government or help my community to build a series of infrastructure .

 

O f course ,buying a house is a good choice ,and I can improve my familiy's living condition . This is a merit about which there is no room for doubt ,yet ,I think buying a business will be more meaningful .

 

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-17 21:17:00 | 只看该作者

感觉好像 例证 没有。

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-17 22:02:00 | 只看该作者
mei ren li wo ,zi ji ding yi xia
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