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12月1日机经独立作文,请帮忙指点,谢谢

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楼主
发表于 2007-12-10 18:03:00 | 只看该作者

12月1日机经独立作文,请帮忙指点,谢谢

没有计时写,并且经过了两次修改,

请大家看看,哪一些句子是可以留下来的,哪一些是要删除的,另外,结构上有什么问题,需要补充哪些.

谢谢大家了.

等待您的指点,

谢谢。


[此贴子已经被作者于2007-12-10 20:56:53编辑过]
沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-12-10 20:58:00 | 只看该作者

12.1你是否同意people should pay to use public transportation

 

 

 

 

We live in an era when things are changing so rapidly, that means our society seems to become an intricate system of interdependent relationships. There is no doubt that the public transportation has an indispensable effect on the transformation of means of human activity and sustainable development. In order to enjoy an excellent service, build more convenient public facilities, and maintain the transportation system, we should pay for the public transportation.

 

 

To begin with, the personnel of the transport industry provide the overall service. People who take enjoyment in the service should pay for it. Take my nephew, Suifeng, the marketing manager of a business company, for example. He rides the different transportation tools in light of the different circumstances. When he goes to the office, he chooses to take the bus or the subway. It is obvious that without the bus-driver, the subway operator and so on, he cannot arrive at his office 20 kilometers away from his home in due time. When he is on a business trip, he usually takes the taxi, train or plane
   
if it is a long distance trip. Without great effort of the related staff, he cannot meet the clients and negotiate promptly. As we all know, "No pains, no gains." But the staff in the transport industry who provides the professional service for people should gain the reasonable payment.

 

 

Furthermore, it is noticeable that the foundation of the public transportation needs large quantities of supports such as financial power and human resources. If we build an airport, for instance, astronomical sum of money will be needed for this project. As a member of the society, people are obligated to pay for the infrastructure construction of the homeland which is crucial for the social progress and generation. The tickets people buy when making use of the transportation will be a part of the investment resource of construction of the traffic system, and accordingly the total transport system will supply the more efficient service. Therefore, this will form a virtuous circle. With regard to our social progress, the total payment is challenging. For that reason, people should make a payment for the tickets.

 

 

In addition, the wastage of the transportation system is surprising as a result of the people’s usage. Although the transportation corporation can insure the machines, the insurance policy cover most damage but not fair wear and tear to the machine under the circumstances of the normal maintenances. For example, the plane will be substituted after flying 20 years, the working life of a taxi is at most 7 years and the subway must be replaced if it is operated for more than XX kilometers. All the equipments above need the large amounts of fiscal support. Consequently, people should pay for the public transportation to furnish the construction of the public system.

 

 

Generally speaking, accompanying the economic construction, transportation increasingly plays a significant role in the economic development.  Now that the transportation professionals offer the people super service, the establishment of the transport system needs the enormous investment, and the related traffic departments must afford the upkeep of the transport system for its favorable operation environment, it is reasonable for the people to have tickets when they enjoy the traffic facilities. As a civilian do what one should do, it will turn out that the huge profits from all kinds of tickets are taken from citizen and used in citizen and the people can expect wider access to super service sooner than the anticipated without the payment of the tickets.

 

 

(588)

(排版了很多次,都排得不太好,只能这样了)

等待您的指点,谢谢。


[此贴子已经被作者于2007-12-10 20:58:52编辑过]
板凳
发表于 2007-12-11 17:59:00 | 只看该作者

写的好多啊!佩服!

地板
发表于 2007-12-11 19:30:00 | 只看该作者

改了下地一段.

We live in an era when things are changing so rapidly, that means our society seems to become an intricate system of interdependent relationships. There is no doubt that the public transportation has an indispensable effect on the transformation of means of human activity and sustainable development. In order to enjoy an excellent service, build more convenient public facilities, and maintain the transportation system, we should pay for the public transportation.

 

(With the radical developments of economy in our society, governments invest huge money building up efficient transportation networks to meet increasingly crucial requirements. Now days, an observable debate captures the public attention that 问题………From my perspective, we should pay to maintain sustainable operation of public facilities and transportation system.)     

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