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巴郎第６套的，帮忙改一下，第一次发帖子修改作文，请问这种作文可以在什么水平上啊？／５５５周六就考试了，现在每个部分都很差的～～！！！
Currently, there is an extended debate on the controversial issue about whether learning a foreign language should stay in the country which speaks the same one or not. Unarguably, different individuals may come up with distinctive opinions due to personal preference and educational background. Some people argue it is a superb way to master an exotic language in a foreign country because of its linguistic climate; while others hold the opinion that, all too often, we will fail to adjust to a new environment, so it will be detrimental to ourselves to reach a new country. As for me, after pondering from various perspectives, I will prefer to agree with the former choice. Of all sorts of facts and reasons can strengthen my viewpoint, I will present the most critical and conspicuous ones here.
The first plain truth, I am presenting there, is that a large amount of comprehensive knowledge will be cultivated by us, not only foreign language, but also the customs and practices. In other words, we can learn more conventions, interpersonal skills and other skills in a new country for us. A good example may be found in a case about one of my best friends, has a poor capable of mastering a language in China who has gone to United States a myriad of years ago. After she went back, I am so surprising that her improvement in English and communication skills. Hence, it provides us a fantastic atmosphere to learn a foreign language well in a country which it is spoken.
Besides, it is reasonable to master a language in the same country because we should say it in our daily life. Undoubtedly, we have no alternative but to say the similar language with the local people in a foreign country because by no means can we say foreign language, nobody would understand us in a new country. The majority of m classmates believe that learning a language in the local country would provide them more opportunities to master this language well and deeply, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets, the reason is that it saves more time to study it than others in their countries. So the striking conclusion is that it is considerable to study a language in a foreign country which it is spoken.
Admittedly, it has a negative effect of learning a foreign language in a different country because coin has two sides. For instance, in the beginning, it is hard for us to chat with others because we have not a solid foreign language foundation, also, we should respect the customs in this foreign country, so a great deal of daily material should be educated by us before arriving at this new country and so forth. However, the advantages of mastering a foreign language in the same country bring more weight than those of learning it in the local country.
To sum up, from what has been discussed above, we can see even though this dilemma still exists in some conditions, which we cannot just turn around from facing because nothing in this world is purely perfect, so it is still safe for us to draw the conclusion that the best way of mastering a foreign language is that staying in this host country instead of in this local area. | 
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发表于 2007-12-1 20:45:00
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