由于最近好像都不出题库了，所以我直接拿的BARRON的上面写，下周考，无论如何求拍下！

urnep

 这篇是BARRON模考TEST 4里的题目，问题是，有些人认为应该赚一大笔钱，有些人认为生活舒适就好。叫分析，并选个立场。

 这篇是BARRON模考TEST 4里的题目，问题是，有些人认为应该赚一大笔钱，有些人认为生活舒适就好。叫分析，并选个立场。

This is a chaotic age. Everybody rushes here and there, cries for money. It's foolish to deny the significant impact of money in our life. However, when people claim only for a large amount of money, I can hardly agree. According to me, leading a life which is comfortable is much more important.

To begin with, a comfortable life helps me to be much happier. Escaping from the endless desire of money, it means that time is much more available than before. I can stay with my family more. My relatives, especially my parents, always want me to go back for a meal, unfortunately I am always dived into the ceaseless order and documents. I can also get out with my friends for the group activities. I haven't taken part in things like that for several years. What's more, the extra time enables me to do some reading, such as fictions, comics, magazines.

Moreover, a comfortable life keeps me much healthier. Comparing to work until 2am and get up at 8 am, now I can just sleep at 10pm, wake up at 6am. It provides me not only the adequate slumber, but the chance to take some exercises in the morning, like jogging, body-shaping exercises. Besides, the pressure of spirit is much lighter than striving for a large amount of money, which also makes much healthier.

Finally, this is maybe a much personal perspective. A people's success, in my opinion, cannot be weighed by the money he earns. There are a lot of occupations, such as teachers, policemen, nurses, which seldom offer a lot of money. People take these jobs because of the self-satisfaction they provide. According to me, earning a comfortable life offers so many assets that the money cannot provide, friends, family members, fit body, self-satisfaction, and so on.

As the facts mentioned above, I suppose my statement is quite clear. I prefer to lead a comfortable life.

开头，呵呵招了，拿了德克版主的万用模板改了下的，请各位狠拍下吧

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hanbingyy

很强的～

alvinma

似乎比较短，有一点语法错误“A people's success”---person or just say:"one's success, in my opinion, cannot............"

urnep

Thanks!这些地方我经常会忽视掉，如果二战的话，会小心的，再次感谢