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TWE103 Money is the only way to be successful

Dollar, the most powerful currency in the world currently as we saw, is transacted over billions throughout the world each year. The one with most money constantly has been considered as the most successful man on earth. In contrast, some people oppose with the opinion that success has various way to be regarded. As far as I concerned, money is not the only way to commit success.

People with much money often have their own issues on the other side which most people just ignore it. Those issues commonly wouldn’t be deemed as a matter of success generally because the effect of the radiance which the money irradiated. The issues such as hard to find a mate who is actually in love with he/she not just because of the dollars in his/her hand, family misery and always be busy in work which would disregard the friends and family, nonetheless might are the crucial reason that many rich men are not satisfied. Countless money cannot fill them up with the reality about their mentality.

On the other hand, people with little money may not be unsuccessful as lots of people believed. Many people consider themselves are succeeded only for the happiness they felt, like getting a job they always want, living in a place they kept looking forward to and marring someone who they are crazy about. Money for those people is in a fairly low level in their mind. They have obtained the thing that they truly want, which is frequently not merely money. My brother Jim feels pleasant all the time due to his lovely wife, clean and trim house and family that love him deeply.

As a comparison, rich people could buy anything they want without concerning about the price. Those things would make them satisfied with the substance. Although Money could give people everything they want in solid however cannot bring anything spiritually, for instance, the actual love.

Undoubtedly, all the explanation supports the remarkable conclusion that money is definitely not the only way to judge someone whether they are successful. Each person has his/her own way to decide if he/she has succeeded. Money is just one of the ways, certainly not a critical one.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-11-15 17:13:28编辑过]