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11#
发表于 2007-11-8 21:05:00 | 只看该作者

加油

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-8 23:41:00 | 只看该作者

今天写了一篇作文DELTA TEST 2

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Subjects such as art,music,and drama should be a part of every child's basic eduction.

There is a hit discussion concerning primory students should learn arts or they should only learn basic science sujects.Some people argue that elementary students should just learn some basic science subjects,such as math,language, chemistry,because they believe that study these subjects will bring further benefit in the children's acdemic career and study art only a waste of time.Howere, i strongly support the view that subjects such as art, music, and drama play an import role in children's development for four reasons.

First,When people in their early age,nobody knows what they are really interest.We must allow them to learn different subjects in different fields.Then we can observe what they are interest and what are they true talent.This type of elementary education is very good for exploring the children's potetial and is benefit for the parents to choose a light future for this chilren.For example, some famous singer stars can success today because music talent was found through teaching them art subjects when they were children.Then they were sent to music school in an early time.If they did not study art subject in primary school, perhaps, the music talent will be found when they are fourty age or even it will never be found in their life.Studying art subjects in primary school not only effect the exploration of the children's talent but also bring some nagtive effect to the children in other fields.

Second,there is an interaction in different subjects.If children do not learn art subjects, their will lead to some bad concequences in their later acdemic fields.For example, subjects such as painting and art are the foundation of architecture. People who have an insights in paitings will more easily to design a beatiful building because they have already accumulated the ability to appreciate the arts.Moreover, studying art subjects will stimulate the children's creativity and enhance the children's memorisation ability.Statistics show us that people who like litsening music are more likely to have innovation ideas and have a good memorisation ability.

Third, even if we can not be a specialist in art fields, what we have learned in our elemotary eduction will benefit our later life. What we have learned will enhance our appreciation.When we go shopping, we will easily to find the suitable suits.When we go to theater, we could appraise a film from different aspects, such as background music and the the mould of characters.All of these, in turn,will enhance our comprehensive quality.Moreover, we have some ways to relax ourself.In this rapid changing society, we often face various pressue.If we have foster some art interest when we were children, we will find a good way to relieve ourself.For example,most of pople will listen to music when they are totally tired and exausted.Then they will get some enegy to restar working.

Fourth, our society needs well-rounded people.We not only need people do well in their field, but also require people do excellent in other fields.For example, in company, no doubte, it is significant to complete our work,but,at the same time, we have to get along with other collegues.Studying the art subjects in our early age is good for cultivating us to be a vertisal person.

In conclusion,although some people maintain that student should not learn art subjects in their basic education because they feel that it will take a lot of children's time, i strongly bolster that the disadvantages are insignificant when it is compared to the advantages. Thus, children should learn the art subjects as long as the parents arrange a good time schedule then the children will not miss other things .


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13#
发表于 2007-11-8 23:42:00 | 只看该作者
不错哦,我12月10号的,今天刚刚开始复习,哎~
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-8 23:47:00 | 只看该作者

前两天写的也一起发上来吧,大家如果有什么意见的多给提提,我来会争取下次写的更好的

11.3号IBT独立作文

People who do not work because they have money are rarely happy. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

 

My neighbor is a rich old man who live in a big house, drive a luxurious car and wear name-brand suits, but he has never earned even one dollar through his life. When he inherited the fortune from his father, he thought the huge money could bring him joys and comforts and he did not need to work at all. Time flies, when he becomes an elder man, he always fell empty, no sense of achievement and no aim of life. Now, sorrow, depression and frustration are awash his life. He always tell us how he regrets he did not work when he was young. From the story of my neighbor I strongly hold the claim that people who do not work will rarely obtain real happiness.

On the one hand, although the people who do not work still can maintain a good substantial life, they will fell empty in their spiritual life. We have to recognize that one of the aim of work is to earn money, but, in turn, work will bring us things far beyond money, such as a sense of satisfy, the happiness of success, the respect of others, and the pursue of life, to list just a few. If people who have never worked because they have money, they only can get the things bought by money but they will never fell the happiness beyond money. Moreover, if The pleasures of idleness soon cloy, they may hit some bad habits. For instants, they are indulged in the red wine for forgetting the nonsense of life,  they are addicted in drugs for kicks, or they watch some films are gratuitous violence and pornography. If these small bad habits are not controlled in proper ways, they may the source of some heinous crimes.
     
If theses bad habits parallel them towards life of crime, the crime will cast shadow in their life and the happiness of life will vanish forever.

On the other hand, if people don’t attend work, they will not experience the hardship of life, namely that they will not know how fantastic their life is. Affluent life makes people more vulnerable. When people who do not work experienced some frustration, they will easily be knocked down. Then they will complain the unfair of life and no courage to live on the world. That is the reason why the survey show us that the rich men, especially who do not work, are more likely get depression. In turn, if people who attend work, they will learn some skills about how to surmount the difficulties, they will know how to face troubles and they can deal with the frustrations easily. When they are in front of difficulties, what they think is how to conquer the difficulties and challenge themselves instead give up life. After they success, they will more cherish the rest life and enjoy the life as much as they can. So it is easier to understand why the rich people who do no work are rarely happy.

In conclusion, if people want to enjoy not only the substantial life but also the spiritual life and want to know the nature of life and happiness ,they would better to work and earn the money by themselves. As long as people work they will know the nature of life.


[此贴子已经被作者于2007-11-8 23:53:35编辑过]
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-8 23:49:00 | 只看该作者

有点晕,为什么发上去,所有的段落动重复了一遍呢

狂汗

谁能告诉我怎么回事?

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-8 23:54:00 | 只看该作者
也编辑不好了,字号又调不到统一大小了,大家凑合看吧,对不住了
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-8 23:58:00 | 只看该作者

又编辑不出来空格了

木有办法了,就这么看吧

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-9 00:00:00 | 只看该作者

感谢ali2006,alexwithibt,helloivory

希望大家都好好复习,拿到自己想要的分数

19#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-9 00:01:00 | 只看该作者

况天佑

加油啊!!

20#
发表于 2007-11-9 00:03:00 | 只看该作者
嗯,谢谢谢谢,你也要加油哦!!祝你成功!!!!~
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