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Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists,was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

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《PREP破解版语法注释分析》里面有一处注解错误

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楼主
发表于 2007-10-31 03:06:00 | 只看该作者

《PREP破解版语法注释分析》里面有一处注解错误

《PREP破解版语法注释分析》18题(OG10 249)

249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own. B

(A)  were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(B)   influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from

(C)  was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to

(D)  was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to

(E)   were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

作者注解:"A. .....whose repertory 和 were influential 主谓不一致..."

这里的were应该是修饰repertory, views and vocal style(a compound subject),  所以用were是正确的;另外C,D的主要错误也在这个语法点上,wordiness and redundancy 都是相对次要的问题。

因为是OG,大家嚼了很多遍了,不用讨论了,只是制作者可能疏忽了

希望更正一下,以方便后面看到的人

新增:另外看到一道题目---46题

除了正确选项A中两个句子之间有连词, 其他选项都缺少连词

个人认为,这也是非常明显和关于正确性的考点

作者好像在解释中没有提到。

PDF格式粘不过来,太长了,有兴趣的可以自己查阅下


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沙发
发表于 2007-10-31 04:25:00 | 只看该作者

我不同意楼上看法哦……
                            

本题主词是Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe这位仁兄
                    

whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style仅是修饰
                    

所以动词必须使用单数

C/D錯是因為形容詞influential;沒有動詞influenced表述清楚直接!


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板凳
发表于 2007-10-31 10:57:00 | 只看该作者
确实是疏忽了,were的主语是whose repertory and vocal style没有问题,谢谢指正

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-2 15:29:00 | 只看该作者

不客气 谢谢你们才对

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-2 15:50:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用yuching730在2007-10-31 4:25:00的发言:

我不同意楼上看法哦……
       

本题主词是Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe这位仁兄
     

whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style仅是修饰
     

所以动词必须使用单数

C/D錯是因為形容詞influential;沒有動詞influenced表述清楚直接!


...whose    repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style...

划线部分是3个名词的并列

yuching 你可能是把views当作谓语动词了


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6#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-10 03:50:00 | 只看该作者

新增:另外看到一道题目---46题

除了正确选项A中两个句子之间有连词, 其他选项都缺少连词

个人认为,这也是非常明显和关于正确性的考点

作者好像在解释中没有提到。

PDF格式粘不过来,太长了,有兴趣的可以自己查阅下

7#
发表于 2007-11-10 04:00:00 | 只看该作者

对啊……..老人家眼力不好真是不好意思误导大家……………

8#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-10 04:17:00 | 只看该作者

哎 说起来还真是可悲又惭愧

主谓一致的错误更加明显我做题的时候竟然没有看出来

做这道题的时候就只凭着这个缺少连词判断出正确答案 惭愧啊~

我总是在关键的时候忽略主谓一致这一条 郁闷啊~

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 楼主| 发表于 2007-11-10 04:20:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用yuching730在2007-11-10 4:00:00的发言:

对啊……..老人家眼力不好真是不好意思误导大家……………

 

晚辈题运稍好罢了
10#
发表于 2007-11-11 04:13:00 | 只看该作者

查了一下46

B\C\E各别皆有使用连词→even though, although, as???

它们不是连词吗???作者在as上有详细说明咧!!!

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