有一个作文题目是说评价一个人是看重他的effort还是achievement

沧海痴痴

我想说看重effort 谁能告诉 能从哪几个方面说 感激不尽

Daffi

I would recommend "achievement", since it is more easily to elaborate.

1. For one thing, achievement is a convincing proof of one's effort.

2. For another, achievement always could prove one's good social relationship, while "effort" only could not.

3. Admittedly, one's effort could tell many things.  But what if he/she make effort in a totally wrong way?

To conclude, success itself is self-explanatory enough.

dram

那文章中每段又是如何阐述呢？