关于抽象名词大于分词动名词

四处走走

ＧＷＤ里的一道ＳＣ题

In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced the greatest translation in any language.

 

1. his translation of the Iliad, a work that, taking him seven years until completion, and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced
2. his translation of the Iliad, a work that took him seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced
3. his translation of the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced it as
4. translating the Iliad, a work that took seven years until completion and that literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced it as
5. translating the Iliad, a work that had taken seven years to complete and literary critic Samuel Johnson, Pope’s contemporary, pronounced it

自己是按照to complete, 时态来做这到道题的，

but have no idea that whether translating the A or his tranlation of the A is better

According to XDF, seems that his translation is better,

哪位朋友来帮忙解释一下啊，

yexiang2007

我觉得这道题pronunced的后面如果没有as那就一定错，而to complete一定比until completion对。所以就选c了。所谓绝对错误大于相对错误嘛，你说的那个名词优于动名词在这里只是一个相对错误吧。对吗？愿意听听大家的意见

四处走走

答案是B的...

我觉得as　不能加哦，　多余的．．

翻译起来感觉是　'被认为是相当于'　的意思

昨天朋友做了这题，一看就排除了D, E觉得很诧异的

zhrjia

我选的是B. 先把A C E 排除了，然后在B D中选择。

A, 我认为 “ a work that, taking him seven years until completion”作为插入语，在这里不对，去掉插入语否则会出现这样的句子“ a work that and that literary...”。
C和E， 错在“a work that had taken seven years ...” 上，谓语时态问题“had taken” 这个表示这个动作在 main clause 的动作“began ”之前，逻辑不通。
D中“ pronounced it as” 好像觉得 “as” 怪怪的
另外B中，“take sb to sth” 应该是最好的表达吧。

不知道这样解题对不对？

zhrjia

应该是 “take sb to do sth”