9月12号报分， 107，附感想和作文模版回馈CD

huiyun

Test	Test Date	Reading	Listening	Speaking	Writing	Total
TELXML	September 12, 2007	29	27	23	28	107

还记得刚从北二外出来的时候，感觉手都在抖，坐在车上发短信都是错别字，一条100字的短信我居然打了5分钟。做完第一篇阅读真的觉得天都塌了，我从小学入学开始考试，一路过关斩将，从来没有一次考试让我这么紧张。平时一篇阅读都是13分钟搞定的，现在20分钟都作不完，最后一题直接挑字数多的选项选。之后的两篇阅读也直接收到了影响，因为紧张，我没办法确定我是否真的理解了文章，脑子里只想着速度。不过事实证明ETS其实是需要平衡每次考试的难度的，大家稳住心态，其实都没问题的。

听力的部分一直是我最强的项目，不过从成绩来看肯定是受了阅读的影响，另外我听力相对做的晚，脑子里面想着偷听别人的口语，还是很受影响的。其实我建议大家不要选择这个方法，最后我会写我对如何安排时间的建议的。

口语的部分比较低，其实反复想想，我们一直在强调听力对口语的重要性。但是各位，听力是听力，口语是口语。新东方老师反复强调的基本模版只能让我们的口语听里来覆盖了所有的点，但是不能让我们取得高分。换句话说，CD上这么多听力NN口语都没能得高分，一定是我们有什么地方没有想到？别怀疑中国人的英语口音，如果你不是有严重的语音语调问题的话，那根本不是影响ETS评分的重点。至少我这几天期待考分的时候，口语能让我想到的就是那些个简单到不能在简单，土到掉渣的模版句子。你的口语模版呢？

我一直担心我的作文会写不完，至少在模考的时候我几乎没有一次能写完的。看过CD各位NN对作文模版的点评，说实话，心里真是一惊。我实在写不出那样长句。而且在思考如何写这样长句的时候，我最宝贵的时间已经耗费掉了。所以我尽力在使用熟悉的句型，表达清楚的意思。各位CDer，我们都学了这么长时间的英语，相信你自己的英语水平和词汇量，少用你不熟悉的单词，少犯逻辑或语法错误，不要让美国人看不懂我们的作文。

这是我对托福四部分准备的一点心得。其实考试的时候，还是要求我们全神贯注的。别担心别人在做什么，其实要想听口语的话机会多的狠，但是用自己听力的时间听实在是不值得。比如在休息回来之后需要确认个人信息，只要你不确认，口语是可以一直听下去的。但是挑对自己偷听的对象，我前面的兄弟。。。声音小＋逻辑性差，真真是考察我的听力呢

最后，感谢CD感谢托版的版主。我是在发现男朋友出轨然后分手之后第3天开始准备托福的，加起来刚刚好是1个月的时间。挫折和心痛几乎充斥了我的整个复习。甚至在新东方上课的时候，老师在扯蛋，我在低下掉眼泪。感谢山版给了我最初的复习建议，好像从一片迷茫中找到了一根稻草。我知道CD上有很多人面临着比我更多困难，我相信只要我们都不放弃，一直努力，一定会有很好的成绩的。

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-10-5 11:44:20编辑过]

huiyun

我用政府支出这个作文来举例。这篇模版我做成之后给过鬼子polish，至少可以肯定合乎鬼子的写作习惯和语法要求。

大家参考吧。

According to the announced annual government report, the amount of government purchasing is continually increasing every year. How should government spend this money? A controversy has arisen in recent years. Depending on their individual backgrounds and various experiences, different people hold a different perspective. Some maintain that government should spend majority of its available budget in developing or buying computer technology to advance the comprehensive national strength. This idea is strongly opposed by numerous people who argue that this money should be used to meet more needs of citizens. I completely agree with the former group, for two key reasons related to increasing productivity and improving communication.

 

First and foremost, to use this limited resource in developing/ purchasing computer technology is to increase productivity, and therefore to expend the wealth of the entire society. This analysis is based on classical economics theory, which believes that increasing productivity is the essential way to benefit both countries and individuals. Computer technology, the most influential technology in 21 century, has proved its capability in changing our life. Abundant examples, such as computer based lathes and production lines, suggest that productivity in most industries was improved significantly. Imagine a production line in an automobile factory which was operated by human being and rested after work time. With help of computer, it can run 24 hours 7days a week without feel tired. According to our experiences, we have reason to believe that the use of limited resources to develop computer technology is justified, by enhancing working efficiency and enriching whole society.

 

Moreover, investing on computer technology not only promotes productivity, but also expedites communication. Computer based communication is so prevalent that it has been accepted as the common tool in any industry. Instant massage and email system help us express our opinion, display our idea as well as learn from others. By utilizing computer, people can save abundant time in waiting for calls and reduce misunderstanding caused by various accents. Obviously, computer technology has brought remarkable convenience in people’s lives, and will keep benefiting human being in future.  

 

It is true that spending on more basic needs does bring some minor merits. For example, it can reduce the gap between the rich and the poor in short term, or increase public interest temporarily. However, as time passes, limited government resource will eventually fail to fulfill the increasing demands. The advantages of expending on computer technology carry more weight than those of spending on basic needs.

 

In conclusion, I think although the spending on basic needs may have its necessity to some extend, the impacts exerted by investing on computer technology are much more desirable and beneficial. Only by advancing computer technology, can our government have more resources and more job opportunities to benefit the society. Therefore, it eventually meets the increasing need from society.

 

fibefly

谢谢分享！！！

xwliao

谢谢～　希望ＬＺ　好运！　我是１５号的，还没出成绩，紧张ＩＮＧ．．．　

mikedong

谢谢 祝楼主好运！！！

yetemwok

I am envoying you!

Congratulations!

leepee

lz还是很坚强的

beibei649

口语不看口音? 为什么日本人平均分16, 荷兰人平均26? 亚洲的就真那面差吗?

评分员很容易以听不懂为理由来拒绝给你高分

yetemwok

想开点，我们参加的是鬼子的考试。口音不好的最大毛病就是鬼子听不懂！如果我的观点有偏见，崇洋媚外，可以把自己/请朋友读一篇T的听力，录音，然后自己听听：我们的录音比TOEFL还难懂！

BY THE WAY，HOLLAND和ENGLISH本来祖上是一家，都是GEMANIC语系的。荷兰鬼子学英语，尤其是口语，本来就比我们容易。另外，我的口语也不怎么样，大家都努力吧！

huiyun

我想我在这里说的绝对了，不好意思。因为本身我的发音属于还行的那种，整体可以保证鬼子听得懂。一个鬼子朋友告诉我他认为我的口语会分数最高的。

口音会有影响，但那不是我们短期可以改变的。

如果想取巧的话，可以考虑试试别的办法。