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Margaret Courtney-Clarke has traveled to remote dwellings in the Transvaal to photograph the art of Ndebele women, whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house.

(A) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography and in a style that varies from woman to woman and house to house

(B) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and their style is varying among women and houses

(C) whose murals are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries are embellished with old and new iconography, and they are in styles that vary from woman to woman and house to house

(D) with murals brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their style varies among women and houses（A）

(E) with murals that are brilliantly colored, their geometrical symmetries embellished with old and new iconography, and their styles vary among women and houses

请教B为什么不对？大全解释说their geometrical symmetries are两个谓语没有连词错。我看不明白，三个并列分句样子挺好的。请教高手们。

Gloriaqd

For B, "their style is varying among women and houses", here the style should vary from woman to woman, and house to house. It is awkward to put women and houses in the same category while they are not. Sorry, cannot type Chinese, hope it will help a little bit.

Hamiton

首先并列句的主语优先指代第一句中主语，这里their想指代 to do 宾语的of 限制词中的women, 太远了! 即使指代dwellings也不够做并列的