大全section 16 No.9

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9.Studies show that young people with higher-than-average blood pressure and their families have a history of high blood pressure are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition.
(A) and their families have a history of high blood pressure
(B) whose families have a history of high blood pressure
(C) and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family
(D) whose families have a history of high blood pressure running in them
(E) with a history of high blood pressure running in their family

答案是B,这里whose 离它修饰对象 young people好远哦，我一开始就把它排除了。
C错在哪里？

donna

whose是指人啊！所以肯定是修饰 young people ，不要被修饰语所迷惑哦！
C首先不够简洁，其次并例的对象有问题，young people 和a history of high blood pressure 做主语，那么谓语也有问题。这里的错误很多啊！