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没限时，感觉写的很痛苦，作文一直就很差，总感觉思路不够开阔，写的时候更是一句话十分钟憋不出来。已经练习写了好几篇，但更本没有什么进步，很难过。 今天把写的发给大家看看，希望大家能多提宝贵意见，狂拍，谢谢！

110. Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.


Whether staying with friends or not depends on personal choice. Form my perspective, I am trend to stay with my friends most of the time rather than stay alone. My reasons for this point of view are listed as follows.

One of primary reasons is that one could enjoy more fun when staying with friends. Human beings are social animals, and we all need friends, otherwise we are likely to feel lonely. Perhaps most people have the same experience as mine, suppose that I feel boring one day, luckily, a friend of mine invites me to play basketball at the moment, all my loneliness would disappear and the only feeling I have at that time is I am happy. When staying with people who shares common interest, common belief, for instance, you can discuss writers you both like, you can see a popular movie, maybe seldom can deny they have more fun than staying alone.

Besides the joy that people can get, it also helps people develop ability of how to get along others. If one like staying alone most of the time, he or she has few opportunities to communicate with others, especially peers. In addition, he or she will hardly meet the situation that people are in sad or angry, thus one would lack of experiences to console others if that happens. On the contrary, people who usually stay with friends, they can have enough chances to practice how to talk to others, how to give advice, and how to share their own joy to others. All these experiences improve your ability of getting along with others.

Admittedly, staying along gives people more time to use themselves. They can read books, watch television, surf on the Internet. However, assume that nobody will talk with you when you are boring, nobody will console you when you suffer a setback, and nobody will come to help when you meet some difficulties in daily life.

In sum, compared with all these disadvantages, staying with friends will promote people's capability of getting along with others, also bring people happiness. Based on these reasons, I would spend most of the time on staying with my friends.