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Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

 

 

There are some critics blame that athletes and entertainers are earning money so easy that s/he only spending few days for advertisement, which can increase large amout of income. In my point will, however, I do deem that they are available to be paid for that, because weather an athlete or an entertainer, they require doing a large amout of hard work, and they have to give up many things due to being a famous. Moreover, working in these fields means that they are extreme superb.

 

 

To be a star, whether in sport or movie, one always takes a big amout of hard work. s/he has to spend a lot of time and money to train his/her capability to reach the level of perfessional before they are being famous and also have to keep training for maintaining his/her ability. For instance, as the distinguished Korean group stars, Tong Vfang Xien Qi, they have been training strictly by their company since they were very young, being famous also did not interrupt or stop their training.Thus, lifestly of a famous star is not as easy as somebody thought, and it requires devotion to s/he’s vocation, which many people hardly to do.

 

 

Second, these stars deserve to make a lot of money because they have to give up common lifestlye. Due to the news reporter, they have to watch up their any words saying to the medium and pulic, have to wear big sunglasses cover their face when they go outside, have to be very careful to deal with emotion, etc. Anyway, they can’t live as common individuals. Again, this is a difficult lifestlye, due to this, some famous gave up their dazziling avenue. Therefore, they are available to gain that much money.

 

 

Finally, working in these domains means that one was born with natural talent. They have harnessed the skills that very few others can do. For example, like NBA stars, their superb jumping, runing, reaction abillity make them have currently achievements. It is too boring if the life without these guys in society who could paly such a role.

 

 

For conculsion, I think famous athletes and movie stars deserve their pay. It seems like too much money when we first notice how much they make, however, after careful consideration, we realize that they must put a lot of work into their careers, much more than ordinary people do in many cases.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-8-3 11:43:56编辑过]