9-15澳门。备考日记+作文+口语纪录，欢迎大家死命拍

alexwithibt

加油.

你在CD上混的日子很久了..., 和和, 开个玩笑.

siwfly

是很久了，从大四开始到现在工作3年，一直在关注着CD啊！呵呵

应该赞扬一下，CD给了我们无数的帮助啊。（斑竹，这不算灌水吧？嘻嘻）

siwfly

最近两天出远门了，都没怎么学习。

今天在家算是还认认真真学习了一会。

1. 按山版的建议，听了一会托福旧听力的段子。

2. 狠狠地把以前的旧托阅读部分看了三个小时，顺便背了些专业词汇。

3. 有下载了一些晚上睡觉前听的资料
   王玉梅托福词汇MP3版，这样我躺在床上就靠这个催眠了。

到目前为止，才看了这么多。

希望晚上能至少练习一篇作文。

siwfly

终于写出了自己的第一篇作文，选了185中的第一题 You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

下面是计时半小时的初篇

If you ask me what I would purchase with enough money, a house or business, I will with no hesitation tell you that I would prefer business.

 

I know that house is important for one’s life. Living in this world, we need a house to live as a shelter to protect ourselves and also to set up a family with a warm home. But so far I’m still too young to get married and have my own family. Moreover I’m in an age of passion and energy that career is what I care the most in this period. I want to have a better career more than a good house. In this case, house is much less attracting to me than a chance that I could start my own business.

 

People may refute me with the statement that if you bought a house, it would be your tangible property. When the price goes up, you can either keep it or sell it and make some profit out of it. But for me, what I care is not the cash but the abilities to make cash. If I could buy a business, I would have chance to accumulate working experience in all aspects, which would be the most valuable asset for my future career life no matter I succeed or failed. And this experience would be able to accompany me during my whole life thus help me to earn much more money than that of buying a house.

 

Maybe I would fail with the business I bought and would regret, but if you never tried something, you would never know what you are capable of. So I would rather take up this opportunity and consider it as my potential success in the future. And this is much more interesting and challenging than buying a house.

siwfly

然后下面是自己初步的修改

If you ask me what I would purchase with enough money, a house or a business, I will with no hesitation tell you that I would prefer the later.

 

I know that a house plays an important role in one’s life. Living in this world, we need a house to stay as a shelter in order to protect ourselves and to set up a warm home, a family. But so far I’m too young to get married and have my own family. Moreover I’m in an age full of energy and ambition that career is what I care the most in this period. I crave for a better career more than a good house. In this case, house is much less attracting to me than a chance that I could start my own business.

 

People may refute me with the statement that if you bought a house, it would be your tangible property. When the price goes up, you can either keep it or sell it and make some profit out of it. But if you bought a business and you failed, you would gain nothing but bankrupt. It’s true that there is risk in doing business but there is no risk, no effort, there will be no gain. In my own understanding, what a business can bring to me now cannot be compared by that of a house. For me, what I care more is not cash but the abilities to make cash. Business can bring you constant value if you know the right way to maintain it. If I could buy a business, I would have chance to accumulate working experience in all aspects by trying to make the operation run and run. That would be the most valuable asset for my future career life no matter I succeeded or failed. And this experience would be able to accompany me during my whole life thus help me to earn much more money than that of buying a house.

 

Even if the result turned out bad, I wouldn’t regret because I had tried my best and had learnt what come only from the failure. I would rather take up this opportunity and would try my best to make it my potential success in the future. This would be much more interesting and challenging than buying a house.

siwfly

希望高手可以指点一下。

不过我发现自己修改作文有很大一个好处就是，其实在限时写作的时候有好多句型和单词都不能及时想起来，为了节省时间只能找简单的来写。但是自己修改了以后，不光是语法错误，还有很多其实马上要想到但是因为时间问题不能去想的固定用法都可以有更深刻的印象。帮助自己记忆

今天的贴就到这里啦。要吃晚饭然后睡觉了。

明天去一趟澳门看考场。又有一天的时间要耽误了。不怕，用我的PDA狂背单词和听听力！

德克的猪

你要是不在你帖子的题目上标注你写了篇作文，在第几楼

就很好会有人会看到你的作文

siwfly

谢谢德猪提醒！=)

你也帮忙改改作文嘛！

siwfly

潜水了十多天了，主要因为自己的笔记本电脑上个星期一坏掉了，搞到现在还没搞好，郁闷死了。只有霸着老爸的笔记本。很不爽！！资料都在自己的电脑上，这一段时间根本没法特别复习。

看到大家的复习势头正猛，我郁闷啦。希望明天能把电脑拿回来....

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crowkiller

帮顶！

嘿嘿，一起加油吧!