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redpassion

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There are some people who consider that 21th century will bring us much pollution, and the other people think that, the development of the science, 21 century will bring us many benefits to upgrade our lives. If I would be asked this issue, I would probably follow latter. In the following discussion I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.
No issue is more important now than the one that refers to computer and internet science. Facts witness an present many examples as below. Today, anytime and anywhere you can check your e-mail online instead of checking your mailbox outdoor; Today at office you can have your net meeting by computer instead of flying to another country to have a face to face meeting; Today in your home you can know what happen from all over the world through the internet or not by reading boring newspapers. Don't you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?
Medicine science is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view. Now with the development of medicine, many illnesses can be treated, so the people's lives have been upgraded. The people can enjoy their life happily. If you can see that, you will understand it more deeply.
Superior as science bringing us is, however, it also have its own shortcomings, such as pollution. Nevertheless, the merits of science bring us carry more weight than that of its disadvantages. So the most striking conclusion is obvious.
To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine t form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely arrive the conclusion that 21th century bring us advance science to improve our lives. In fact not only do I prefer to science improvement but also prefer to improve more science as much as possible.

redpassion

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Why people choose to go abroad is a hot topic for us todays.Yet I am,and probably always will be,a deep love of going abroad to have better education.There are many reasons I think are very forehead.In the following discussion,I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my reasons.

No issue is more important today than this one that the quality of education is a very important part which means everything in the people's mind in china.We all want to have the best education in order to have the better career,and can make much more money than the others.Facts witness and present many examples.In China,you can not get modern education,so after finishing school,what you can earn for your job is much less than the one who study and work in US.You also would realize that the most famous scientists are always from those western countries.What we care most is the education.Don't you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?

Knowing the world is another chief and head reason that I have chosen to put here.It is no better illustration that can prove the view,a best way to know what is happen in the world is to live and study abroad.In the westen countries,everything changes everyday quickly.Living in those countries we can learn much information and many cultures that we cannot know If we were in our own country.If you can see that,you can understand it more deeply.

There are also many other reasons for going abroad,such as learning the English better,having a more comfortable job,getting much more experience,doing the bigger business,so the merits of going aborad carry much more weight than that of not going abroad,and thus the reasons are very striking and obvious.

To sum up,given reasons discussed above,which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive,we can safely reach the conclusion that going abroad is a wise way for education and knowing the world.In fact,not only do I prefer to go aborad,but also prefer to go to the countries as many as possible.

redpassion

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Whether working in a small company or working in a large company is a hot topic today. There are many people who think that working in a small company is better, but the others might prefer working in a large company. If facing the question, I would probably follow the latter one. In the following discussion I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.



No issue is more important than this one that a large company have a much more systematic management system which is the found of a successful company helping you know many things about marketing, managing, financing, and so on to deeply improve your personality and ability. Facts witness and present many examples as below: in a large company, everything has it own rule so that you can do many things more easily than in a small company. In a large company, the management is much better than that in a small company. In a large company also can help you learn many management skills that can lead you to success in the future. Don't you think that the examples quoted above are very persuasive?



The reputation is another chief and head reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can prove the view, namely a good reputation means success. Today the most important thing that every company cares for is its own reputation which can bring the company many customers and opportunities and thus make high profits and achieve the success. That is the reason why so many people prefer to work in a big company. In this fiercely competitive marketing society, good reputation means every thing for success. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.



Superior as working in a large company is, however, working in a small company also has some advantages, such as knowing each other. Nevertheless, the merits of working in a large company carry much more weight than that of working in a small company. So the conclusion is most striking and obvious.



To sum up, given reason discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that working in a large company is better than working in a small company. In fact, not only do I prefer to working in a large company, but also prefer to be in a company as large as possible.

redpassion

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Whether building a new sports stadium or not is a hot topic in our neighborhood.There are many people who think building a sports stadium is good,but others consider that bilding a new sports stadium is not very good.If I would face to the question,I would probably aggree with the first one.In the following discussion,I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important todays than the one refers to health.Facts witness and present many examples.Today,people who want to enjoy life should have a very good body.If you have a good body,you can travel around the world with your good friends;If you have wonderful body,you can climb mountains with your parents in the holidays;If you have great body,you can enjoy your leisure time with your children and wife to smell the flower.How to keep your body healthy?Yes,by taking exercises in the sports stadium which is a good place for all of us to keep healthy.Don't you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?

Entertaiment is another chief and head reason that I have chosen to put here.It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view that refers to entertainment.We work hard in work time in order to support our family.After working,all of us want to relax ourselves.How to spend our leisure time?Where to take our entertainment?which kind of entertainment we should choose?The best answer is spending our leisure time in sports stadium and doing some exersices to enjoy our life. If you can see that,you can understand it more deeply.

Superior as building a new sports stadium,however,it also has its own disadvantages,such as too many people in our neighborhood.Nevertheless,the merits of building a new sports stadium carry more weight than that of disadvantages.So the most striking conclusion is obvious.

To sum up,given reasons discussed above,which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive,we can safely arrive the conclusion that building a new sports stadium is better.In fact,not only do I prefer to build a new stadium in our neighborhood,but also prefer to build such kind of buildings as many as

Luffy

呵呵， “问题“少年终于现身了~~~

dudu2

HI ，RESPASSION：

你的话很有哲理。我想在此求教。万望指点！
我从今年1月，9月，11月分别考了3此TOEFL， 24 11-28 24，4  240， 24 10-28 24，5 247， 24， 12-28 25 作文还没出来。如果没5分就过不了250。 我真的不知该如何复习才能有效提高。 我感觉阅读不是词汇两的问题， 在理解上总是有问题， 所以我想也影响听力答题。 网上朋友似乎都在讨论听力，我想请教您我该如何提高阅读。我想我是遇到了平台区，我有决心慢慢努力提高ENGLISH。 但当务之急， 我要250才够申请学校。
Thanks in advance!

s_haiqiu

redpassion 兄,你是我见过的最好斑竹,顶!!!!!
我昨天写作文时就用了你的魔板,我不怕.

linda05312

的确是个很不错的版主!!!

gongxi12

redasson斑竹！虽然我的作文只有3。5但是我最想感谢的人就是你了！
衷心的感谢你对我们的帮助！真的！

redpassion

dudu2
阅读的时候文章看2遍，然后把所有的问题的答案都定位到文章中的具体句子
还有就是记住，infer题往往都是每段的最后一句话，你多练练，就会有很多感悟的~~~~
加油~~