[求助]og11紫皮---2

帅小琳

2 however much United States voters may agree that there is waste in government and that the government as a whole spends beyond its means,it is difficult to find broad support for a movement toward a minimal state.

其中E选项是:There is agreement among United States voters that

og 解释说E是一个run-on句子,但没有may所以不对.

那请问是不是加上may E选项就对了呢?^^谢谢

llxx1985cn

以下是引用帅小琳在2007-7-30 8:28:00的发言：

2 however much United States voters may agree that there is waste in government and that the government as a whole spends beyond its means,it is difficult to find broad support for a movement toward a minimal state.

不对，因为两句话中间就只用逗号隔开是不正确的，必须要有连词，就像正确选项有一个however来做连词

LuckiPanda

there is agreement that...and that..., it is difficult
这个为什么是run-on结构? 单从语法角度讲没什么问题呀

LuckiPanda

哦明白了，要连词

LuckiPanda

那如果是
Even there is agreement among United States voters that...and that..., it is...

这样的应该是对的吧？

LuckiPanda

写错了，不是even, 应该是although

Although there is agreement among United States voters that...and that..., it is...
这句对吗？

llxx1985cn

 原句里有一个may是不能省的

LuckiPanda

那这句对吗

Although there may be an agreement among United States voters that...and that..., it is...

呵呵我很无聊

帅小琳

谢谢各位解答,可是到底什么是run-on结构呢?og说是两个独立的从句没有特定的标点连接．也就是说run－on结构本身就是错的么？

og前面的解释中correct:JC is still a feared batter,most pitchers don't want to face him.这句就没连词的两个句子啊．．．怎么回事呢

xueer

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Examples:
Correct: “Jose Canseco is till a feared batter; most pitches don’t want to face him.”

经过调查，发现OG承认自己错了，并且已经更正。