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cherryzha

Describe an occasion when you sere surprised. What happened to you and why did you feel surprised?

我是这么答的，请大家帮忙改。45秒说不了多少，

A wonderful occasion always comes to my mind that once surprised me greatly. That was my first birthday in the University and at that night, when I went back to my dormitory, the lamp suddenly turned off when I opened the door, a big beautiful cake with nineteen kindling candle on it appeared on the table in front of me. At the same time, everyone in the dormitory jumped up saying “happy birthday” to me. I was so surprised and I myself almost forgot my birthday. Anyone would be affect by this occasion I think. It seemed that I was at home, though, my parents were there. My roommates were like my sisters giving me care and help in my independent life.

cherryzha

上面少了一个词：My parents weren't there.

cherryzha

what type of home would you like to live in?

我只能说说内部了，外部的来不及说。

I would like to live in a big house with three commodious bedrooms, two bathrooms and a guest room. First my family is a three-generation one including my parents, the couple of my husband and me, and my daughter. So we need three commodious bedrooms for us respectively and also I want the three rooms would be in the south of the house that letting sufficient sunlight coming into. Second, the two bathroom are enough for us and will solve the present problem that every one in my home would use the bathroom at the same time in the morning. Finally, the guest room would leave for my friends for they often visit my home for several days.

cherryzha

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