At the annual stockholders meeting, investors heard a presentation on the numerous challenges facing the company, including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the declining sales for the company’s powerful microprocessor chip. A. including among them the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patentinfringement suit and the declining sales for B. which includes the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and declining sales of C. included among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patentinfringement suit as well as a decline in sales for D. among them the threat of a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit and the decline in sales of E. among these the threat from a rival’s multibillion-dollar patent-infringement suit as well as the decline in sales for A,including修饰主句主语或就近都不对,including和among冗余 B,which就近修饰对象错,declining sales不好 C,these D is the best,同位语 E,these,threat from不好,sales for不如sales of合适 These这样的词是不能单独指代的,后面经常要加复数名词。 同位语结构
问题是:我怎么就没看出有同位语结构? 这句话怎么读起来这么不舒服??
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