周末考试，跪地求改！

betterfuture

第二次写，感觉时间比第一次宽松了一些。不过最终还是没时间来检查。

原本奉上吧，弱弱的拼写错误就不麻烦大家改了，多谢！！！

Letting a friend make mistake is better than doing something that may destroy the friendship. 

In this contemporary society, friends play more and more significant role in an individual's life. Therefore, how to maintain a good relationship with our friends becomes a central topic in our daily life. When it comes to the problem that whether we should point out the friend's mistakes, some consider that it is not an advisable idea since it will detroy the friendship. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this viewpoint, since the destruction of friendship relates little to this action, on the other hand, keeping secret sometimes would detroy the friendship more seriously. 

In the first place, keeping secret concerning a friend's mistakes in order to preserve the friendship actually an action of no responsibility for our friend. Being friend with each other means taking all our effort to help our friend and benefiting each other. When our friends do something excellent, we should send our best wishes, as well as encouragement, to them. On the contrary, when our friends make mistakes, it is quite necessary for us to assist them to analysis the reason for the mistake and help them to correct it. Probably it will harm the friendship to some extent, however in a long run, it really benefit our friends, for the reason that they are more justifiable and complete. But if we fail to tell them in order for so-called "friendship", our friends perhaps would make more mistakes in the future and this circumstance is not what we initially expected. 

Also, in my opinion, telling their mistakes can strengthen the friendship rather than "destroy". At the same time when we point out our friends' mistakes, as well as provide them useful suggestions, it expresses clear information that we really care about our friends and want them be better and better. Therefore, our friends will thank us when realizing this point.  

In addition, I think the key to decide whether would destroy the friendship depend more on the way that we point out the mistakes, instead of the fact that telling mistakes itself. No doubt that if we express ourself in an aggressive approach and just blame our friends, they will be angry and even end our friendship. Nevertheless, if we point out the mistakes in a suggestive way and help them to carefully analysis the mistakes and their potential damage in a relative mild way, our friends cannot refuse our suggestion and would appreciate our kind instruction instead. 

In sum, based on the demonstrations listed above, promptly letting our friends know what they have done is wrong not only would not destroy our friendship if we express our opinion through an appropriate way, but also our friendship will be strengthened greatly.

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-7-19 18:35:19编辑过]

德克的猪

都要考试了，不要顾及这个了。

按照自己的思路写就是。