哥哥姐姐看看这样的作文观点是否老套

逆风居士

Nowadays, more and more people want to go to universities having promoted studiies.There are some personal perspectives I give to explain the reason why they anticipate the high-level educational community.
To begin with, studying in university can broad our eyes. People can learn advanced knowledge which cannot have in normal education.
What's more, a graduated diploma can give them more job hunting opportunity. There are more and more drastic competitions in modern period.So we should chase the
Besides, people who need an academic certification wants to get respect around others. They want to chase the opportunity

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如何在老套中出新呢？

德克的猪

绝对老套。

德克的猪

不过，思路老套不一定就会得低分。只要你写得好，思路再老套，都是可以得高分的。

语言不要老套就是。nowadays这种词汇，不要出现。

KevinDurant

nowadays

逆风居士

独立写作得高分的条件是什么呢？语言，结构，语法，词汇，还有逻辑？