Prep1-127who 难道不用紧跟在被修饰后面？

dduckii

127.
                    (31278-!-item-!-188;#058&004418)

 

After decreasing steadily in the mid-1990's, the percentage of students in the United States finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, up to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and 84.8 percent in 1998.

 

(A) finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, up to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and

(B) finishing high school or earning equivalency diplomas, increasing in the last three years of the decade, rising to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and from

(C) having finished high school or earning an equivalency diploma increased in the last three years of the decade, and rose to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and from

(D) who either finished high school or they earned an equivalency diploma, increasing in the last three years of the decade, rose to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and

(E) who finished high school or earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade, to 86.5 percent in 2000 from 85.9 percent in 1999 and

正确答案为E

根据时态平行对称　finishing high school or having earned equivalency diplomas  排除A

                             having finished high school or earning an equivalency diploma 排除C

                             either finished high school or they earned an equivalency diploma 排除D either... or不工整

然后我就根据E中who finished high school or earned equivalency diplomas increased in the last three years of the decade

　　　　　　　　是修饰students的，然而却跟在了United States的后面就排除了E

因为如果是that引导修饰的话是要紧跟被修饰词，我想who也是一样的

请大家为我解疑释惑 谢谢！！！！

jonesfj

我是这样认为的:句子大结构为：the percentage...increased ....to ...

而in the United States是插入语，所以后面 who 是修饰students而不是US

至于Ｂ、Ｃ、Ｄ都有一个语意重复的问题：increased 已表增加，而rising,rose 都是语意重复．

shuishui_xp

同问，为什么这题的who就是不可以呢？？请大家解答

122. (30951-!-item-!-188;#058&004354)

 

Surveys have shown that in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent

countries, the consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have deficient

levels of these nutrients in their blood.

 

(A) in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption

of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have

(B) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, they consume

one or more essential nutrients insufficiently or have

(C) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, one or more

essential nutrients are consumed insufficiently or having

(D) up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries who consume

insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or who have

(E) up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries consume

insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or have

 

句子结构：Surveys have shown that… elderly people… consume… or have…

主语是surveys，谓语是have shown，后跟that引导的宾语从句说明show的内容，宾语从句的主语是

elderly people，由who引导的定语从句修饰，并列谓语是consume和have。

 

考点：指代一致、逻辑表达、平行对称

指代一致，当句子中有多个复数名词时，注意
        they 的指代对象，避免指代歧义的发生致使句子逻辑

关系混乱。

逻辑表达-修饰，副词修饰动词，形容词修饰名词，很多选项会将副词与形容词混用，使句子意思发

生变化，要特别留意；定语从句修饰紧临的名词或代词。

平行对称-句子，表达并列的含义，如果主语相同，最好用由
        and 或
        or 连接的并列谓语，平行且简洁。

 

(A) they的指代对象错误；or连接的并列结构不平行。

(B) they的指代对象不清楚；副词insufficiently修饰动词consume，与原句形容词insufficient修饰对象

不同，改变了原句要表达的意思。

(C)  被动语态的表达方式不清楚，没有说明施动对象；or having没有平行对象，因为前面是are

consumed。

(D) who引导的并列定语从句错误地修饰紧临的名词countries。

(E)  正确，宾语从句谓语结构是elderly people consume or have，who引导定语从句修饰主语。

 

houjian517

今天刚看了一个类似的题目，限定词是一定跟在修是名词的后边，本题也是一样！

本题为倒装句，因为in US 较短，而修饰语很长

jingjing6688

up~~

jingjing6688

感觉who指人,不可以指countries啊,122题的解释怎么会出现 who引导的并列定语从句错误地修饰紧临的名词countries呢?指代不是可以通过人&物一致来清晰指代么?

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-4-6 12:08:39编辑过]

Brilliance

求解

红尘道士

正确答案E中to前面为什么要有个逗号啊？

情未浓

"NOUN + PREPOSITION + NOUN + who...."
In this situation who will refer to the eligible noun. Eligible noun will meet the following conditions:

1, It agrees with the verb after who.
2, It makes the sentence meaningful.
3, Who cannot refer to things. Who refers to person(s).

in addition, the problem in choice D of 122. (30951-!-item-!-188;#058&004354) is that there is no predicate in the whole sentence.

hope it helps.